短文改错求学霸 1.Today the graduation ceremony was held and some st

短文改错求学霸 1.Today the graduation ceremony was held and some students from Senior One and Two were invited to attend an event.The students were very exciting as they were m graduate with the school,where they had studied for three years.The representative of the graduates made a speech,saying that he has mixed feelings as they would leave their friend and go to different colleges.He was thankful to the teachers who had helped us to learn and at the same time he regretted working hard.As I was not to graduate,I felt excited.I learned from the ceremony which I would value every hour of the time in school in case of I would regret one day.2.I like doing physical exercise.Our teachers say physical movements not only improve one’s health,but also does good to the efficiency of learning.On the morning,I spend at least half an hour run on the playground,where there are hundreds of students running around.In the afternoon,I played basketball matches with his classmates against other classes.Sometimes I join my friends in football matches.Before the game is over,I am dry through.Tired as I am,but I feel very happy.From working with my classmates,I have learned an importance of cooperation.That is more,I feel more energetic after movements and learn things fast with a clearer head.

graduate from 再答： regretted working hard？
再答： in the morning
再答： Spend time to do / spend time doing
再答： 第二段有点时态问题，你是在描述一天还是你的常态？前后文时态不统一。。。
再答： I learn from the ceremony that...
再答： Every hour 就可以了，of time 删掉
再答： Every hour 就可以了，of time 删掉
再答： Dry through?不懂
再答： I am happy though I am exhausted.
再问： 最近做的这些短文改错都不是很好……总是怪怪的，放假每天都做，老师已经把高考的改错都让我做了，谢谢都是原创啥的，题不是很好
再问： 我明天让老师看看好了，有的可能发错了之类的
再答： With "his" classmate 这到底是谁啊？
再答： Attend the event
再问： 我也觉得乱七八糟的……
再问： 我也觉得乱七八糟的……
再答： Learn the importance
再答： There is more.
再答： I think studying is easier with a clear mind.
再答： Movement有点奇怪，exercises就好了啦。
再答： who had helped "us"
再答： In case of sth
再答： In case (sentence)
再问： 已经差不多了，我觉得这文章不太好，明天让老师看看吧，谢谢你啦
再答： 客气了