作业帮帮忙看一篇英语作文有无语法错误并指出
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帮忙看一篇英语作文有无语法错误并指出
I have a great dream .i want to be an astronaut when i grow up .i am surprised at univers .it is very beautifui and intretsting .i liked the univers very much .i know something about it i know there is a solar system .i amired yangliwei and other astronauts n.they are very great and cool .so i will study hard .i hope my dream will come true .i belive in myself .i can achieve my dream
I have a great dream .i want to be an astronaut when i grow up .i am surprised at univers .it is very beautifui and intretsting .i liked the univers very much .i know something about it i know there is a solar system .i amired yangliwei and other astronauts n.they are very great and cool .so i will study hard .i hope my dream will come true .i belive in myself .i can achieve my dream
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I have a great dream .I (i) want to be an astronaut when I (i)
grow up .I (i) am fascinated with the (surprised at) universe (univers)
.It (it) is very beautiful (beautifui) and interesting (intretsting) .
I (i) like (liked) the universe (univers) very much.I (i) know something
about it.I (i) know there is a solar system(1) .I (i) admire (amired)
Yang Li Wei (yangliwei) and other astronauts.They (they) are very great
and cool .S0 (so) i will study hard.I (i) hope my dream will come
true.I believe (i belive) in myself(2) .I (i) can achieve my dream.\x14
(1) solar system似乎不止一个
可以考虑用 some/many solar systems
(2) 可以用have confidence 来代替believe
I have a great dream .I (i) want to be an astronaut when I (i)
grow up .I (i) am fascinated with the (surprised at) universe (univers)
.It (it) is very beautiful (beautifui) and interesting (intretsting) .
I (i) like (liked) the universe (univers) very much.I (i) know something
about it.I (i) know there is a solar system(1) .I (i) admire (amired)
Yang Li Wei (yangliwei) and other astronauts.They (they) are very great
and cool .S0 (so) i will study hard.I (i) hope my dream will come
true.I believe (i belive) in myself(2) .I (i) can achieve my dream.\x14
(1) solar system似乎不止一个
可以考虑用 some/many solar systems
(2) 可以用have confidence 来代替believe