作业帮一篇初一英语作文 大家来帮我纠错
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一篇初一英语作文 大家来帮我纠错
原文：Hello everybody,my name is Magan.There are three people in my family,my mother,my father and I.My father is a manager.He is tall and fat.He is really kind and patient.He likes read newspaper,watches TV and he is good at Maths.He often helps my study.
My mother is a Chinese teacher.He is not tall,not fat and she is very beautiful.She favourite color is brown and red.She likes animal very much.She is good at play the piano.She is always hard-working.
I am a middle school student.I am not thin.My favourite color is white and blue.My favourite hobbies is draw and sing.
I love my family,because I love my father and mother.
一个细小的错误都要帮我指出来 少加一个S也要说出来
原文：Hello everybody,my name is Magan.There are three people in my family,my mother,my father and I.My father is a manager.He is tall and fat.He is really kind and patient.He likes read newspaper,watches TV and he is good at Maths.He often helps my study.
My mother is a Chinese teacher.He is not tall,not fat and she is very beautiful.She favourite color is brown and red.She likes animal very much.She is good at play the piano.She is always hard-working.
I am a middle school student.I am not thin.My favourite color is white and blue.My favourite hobbies is draw and sing.
I love my family,because I love my father and mother.
一个细小的错误都要帮我指出来 少加一个S也要说出来
1.第三行：and me!第四行：likes reading,watching tv,like 后面永远doing!第七行,he改she,你妈是女的.
animal改成animals,good at playing.
my favorite hobbies is drawing and singing.错的不少啊 兄弟
animal改成animals,good at playing.
my favorite hobbies is drawing and singing.错的不少啊 兄弟