作业帮英语作文修改.请尽量在保持愿意的基础上进行修改,谢谢!
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英语作文修改.请尽量在保持愿意的基础上进行修改,谢谢!
Directions: You made an appointment with your client, but unfortunately, your flight delayed for three hours. Write a letter to your client. Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter. Use “Wang Lin” instead. Do not write the address.
Dear luxi
Write this letter is to apologize to you, I can't arrive on time our meeting place, because the plane was delayed for three hours, if you are convenient to delay our meeting 3 hours, if it is not convenient to the words that we'll about time, I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies., please your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Lin
Directions: You made an appointment with your client, but unfortunately, your flight delayed for three hours. Write a letter to your client. Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter. Use “Wang Lin” instead. Do not write the address.
Dear luxi
Write this letter is to apologize to you, I can't arrive on time our meeting place, because the plane was delayed for three hours, if you are convenient to delay our meeting 3 hours, if it is not convenient to the words that we'll about time, I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies., please your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Lin
1.Write this letter is to apologize to you--I'm writing this letter to apologize to you.
2.I can't arrive on time our meeting place,because the plane was delayed for three hours,--I can't arrive at our meeting place on time because the plane was delayed for three hours.（逗号去掉）.
3.if it is not convenient to the words that we'll about time--不是很懂这句话的意思
4.I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position --I hope that you can think this problem from my point of view.
5.please your reply--I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
感觉这篇作文中间都是逗号,很不合理,也不美观.
另外,充满了中式英语的感觉.
打了这么多字,希望楼主采纳,
2.I can't arrive on time our meeting place,because the plane was delayed for three hours,--I can't arrive at our meeting place on time because the plane was delayed for three hours.（逗号去掉）.
3.if it is not convenient to the words that we'll about time--不是很懂这句话的意思
4.I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position --I hope that you can think this problem from my point of view.
5.please your reply--I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
感觉这篇作文中间都是逗号,很不合理,也不美观.
另外,充满了中式英语的感觉.
打了这么多字,希望楼主采纳,