英语改错看下面一段段文,请纠正错误,若无错误,请说明无错误A terrible earthquake hit Wench

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英语改错
看下面一段段文,请纠正错误,若无错误,请说明无错误
A terrible earthquake hit Wenchuan,Sichuan Province on May 12th,2008.Houses fell down at one time,the traffic became bad,school stopped their classes.A great number of people were injured in this disaster.People's life were influenced a lot.But,people were not scared of this disaster.Besides,they helped each other,and warmed each other.The soldier who came to help the people in trouble tried their best to help them out of trouble,they gave people tents,food and so on.That's love.We should love other people,then our country would become better.
还有请大致查出这篇短文有多少单词.

结构不错,但有些小问题
1.at one time用的不太好,虽然也能表示同时,但较生僻,最好用at the same time
2.Houses fell down at one time,the traffic became bad,school stopped their classes.这句要分为三个句子.(后面也有)
3.But,用However,
4.Besides应用Instead
5.soldier 最好加s
6.would 最好用will

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