作业帮英语作文评析（七年级水平） 正文如下
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英语作文评析（七年级水平） 正文如下
Today,it was a sunny day.Wang Hua went to the Central Park.There are many people are rowing boats in the lake.Suddenly,a small girl few down in the water.Wang Ming didn’t know how to swim,but he jumped in to the water and picked small girl up to the boat.The girl was very grate to him.
Today,it was a sunny day.Wang Hua went to the Central Park.There are many people are rowing boats in the lake.Suddenly,a small girl few down in the water.Wang Ming didn’t know how to swim,but he jumped in to the water and picked small girl up to the boat.The girl was very grate to him.
时态上来讲,运用过去式其实可以,因为记录的是一天中的事.当然,用一般现也行（也就是你现在用的这个事态）.
There are many people are rowing boats in the lake.——There are 的“are”若是全篇用过去式,可改为“were”“.若是一般现,则不变.“people“后面的“are”去掉.
Suddenly,a small girl few down in the water——这里的“few"应该是“fall”,如果你全篇采用过去式,那么则把“few”改为“fell”.如果全篇用的一般现,则改为“falls”（三人称单数）.此外,“down”改为“into”.因为是掉入水中,介词很形象,“入”就用“into”.“the water”的“the”可以不要.
but he jumped in to ------”jumped“是过去式就不变,一般现就改为“jumps;'.“in”和“to”应该连起来用作“into”
to the boat-------“the”改为“a”好些,因为这个“船”前面没有提到,“the”有时候表示强调.
The girl was very grate to him.——“grate”改为“grateful”.对某人心存感激,用短语“be grateful to "
总的来说,文章意思还是明朗的.就是有点失态混乱.要么就全部用过去式,要么就全部用一般现.尽量不要一处过去式,一处一般现那样.很多时候,老师会很注意看文章时态,时态错误就很严重了.还有一些小问题,自己多注意以下.不懂的可以问问老师.以上供参考.
There are many people are rowing boats in the lake.——There are 的“are”若是全篇用过去式,可改为“were”“.若是一般现,则不变.“people“后面的“are”去掉.
Suddenly,a small girl few down in the water——这里的“few"应该是“fall”,如果你全篇采用过去式,那么则把“few”改为“fell”.如果全篇用的一般现,则改为“falls”（三人称单数）.此外,“down”改为“into”.因为是掉入水中,介词很形象,“入”就用“into”.“the water”的“the”可以不要.
but he jumped in to ------”jumped“是过去式就不变,一般现就改为“jumps;'.“in”和“to”应该连起来用作“into”
to the boat-------“the”改为“a”好些,因为这个“船”前面没有提到,“the”有时候表示强调.
The girl was very grate to him.——“grate”改为“grateful”.对某人心存感激,用短语“be grateful to "
总的来说,文章意思还是明朗的.就是有点失态混乱.要么就全部用过去式,要么就全部用一般现.尽量不要一处过去式,一处一般现那样.很多时候,老师会很注意看文章时态,时态错误就很严重了.还有一些小问题,自己多注意以下.不懂的可以问问老师.以上供参考.