求英语作文稿Should college studengts be allowed to rent an apaetme

求英语作文稿Should college studengts be allowed to rent an apaetment off campus?

Should college studengts be allowed to rent an apartment off campus?
As a college student,I think that if economy conditions allow ,students should be encouraged to rent an apartment off capus.
Here are some of my opinions.First of all,college students are most already adults,they should have the ability to take care of themselves.And renting an apartment outside school can exercise independent consciousness of the college students,they can cook for themselves in their apartment and do some daily chores.
Secondly,the apartment outside living can be more convenient because it wouble more flexibly to range their own schedules and improve the learning efficiency.
Finally,renting an apartment outside school can make students have more private space,not like living in the dormitory which easily affect others.Itan in this way,it also helps to improve the quality of sleeping.
Yet every coin has two sides.Renting an apartment outside may not be safe.Therefore it requires students to be more careful.This,to a certain extent,also can strengthen students' ego to protect consciousness.So overall,renting an apartment off campus is a good idea whice benefits outweighs the negatives.
呵呵不知道你要多少字的,暂时就写这么多.如果不够的话我再加.另外,额,那个题目的“apaetment "应该是apartment 老实说,作为一个住了7年学校并且将继续“被”住校的我.真的好想自己能在外面租个房子啊.