英语作文改错,求助!Dear sir, Last year I buy a refrigerator in your s

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英语作文改错,求助!
Dear sir,
Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store in Changan road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on . At first it is low but gradual it becomes louder and louder. To wake the matter worse, it even stopped working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend . please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thank you very much.

1.buy 改bought 2.shape前加the 2.make a noise(加a)3.turned 前加is 4.gradual 改为gradually 5.stopped改为stops 6.disappointing改为disappointed 7.people 改为person 8.be at home(加be) 9.to here删掉to
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