Dear Bob,Is everything goes smoothly?I came back from Canada

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Dear Bob,
Is everything goes smoothly?I came back from Canada last week.Yesterday,when I was looking at my notebook,I found a music CD in my luggage.The CD was last month which I borrow from you.I am sorry to forget to return to you.
I wonder if it is convince for you to tell your address to me.I will send this CD by Express Mail Services to you as soon as possible.By the way,I will go to Canada on next Sunday,so I can take this CD to you by myself.
Two ways above are providing you to choose.Please tell me you choose and accept my sincere apologies.I am looking forward to your early replay.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming

Is everything going well?
yesterday后面的逗号去掉.
when I was looking for my notebook 根据上下文,你应该是寻找笔记本的时候吧
The CD was the one that I borrowed from you last month.
I am sorry that I have forgotten to return it to you.
Is it convenient for you to tell me your address please?不要太罗嗦
I will send it to you by Express Mail as soon as possible.
next Sunday前面的on去掉
so I can give it to you by myself 重复说this CD显得啰嗦
Which way do you prefer?Please let me know and accept my sincere apology.
本来看到很多人回答不想发过来的,但是觉得楼上的回答还不够全面.

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