作业帮小学五年级英语作文.老师出了一篇名为（dream）的英语作文,请各位帮我找一下错误,感谢每一个人!DreamI have
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小学五年级英语作文.
老师出了一篇名为（dream）的英语作文,请各位帮我找一下错误,感谢每一个人!
Dream
I have a dream that is get into Columbia University, a great university in the financial center of the world.
when I had first known that university it was loved by me.
Now a silly young dream twined from a silly boy to an university which is one of the best universities in the world.
I will be success that bright of the wisdom is embedded by my head.
I have always been studying that takes a very long time in a day for a long time.
In 2008 Mrs. Clinton said that,‘ You can be anything You want to be!’ so I believe that I will be.
This is my dream it is young dream, but it is a bright, so darkness will eliminate one day...
每次都害怕出错,所以很爱在这里问.请大家指出我所有的错误,以及如何改可以获得更高的分数
老师出了一篇名为（dream）的英语作文,请各位帮我找一下错误,感谢每一个人!
Dream
I have a dream that is get into Columbia University, a great university in the financial center of the world.
when I had first known that university it was loved by me.
Now a silly young dream twined from a silly boy to an university which is one of the best universities in the world.
I will be success that bright of the wisdom is embedded by my head.
I have always been studying that takes a very long time in a day for a long time.
In 2008 Mrs. Clinton said that,‘ You can be anything You want to be!’ so I believe that I will be.
This is my dream it is young dream, but it is a bright, so darkness will eliminate one day...
每次都害怕出错,所以很爱在这里问.请大家指出我所有的错误,以及如何改可以获得更高的分数
I have a dream that is get into Columbia University, a great university in the financial center of the world.
改为：I have a dream that i can get into Columbia University,which is a great university in the financial center of the world..
when I had first known that university it was loved by me. 改为：On hearing the university,i fell in love it immediately.
第三句,我没有明白你写的意思呀.
第四句：i will succeed if the bright wisdom can be embedded in my mind.
第五句：In order to achieve my goal,i have been studying very hard for a long time every day.
第六句：i can still remember what Mrs. Clinton said to me ,she said you can make your dream come ture if you put your heart into it,which i will believe forever.
第七句：this is my dream,it is a young dream, but it is very bright for me.of course,the darkness will eliminate one day.
望采纳.3Q
改为：I have a dream that i can get into Columbia University,which is a great university in the financial center of the world..
when I had first known that university it was loved by me. 改为：On hearing the university,i fell in love it immediately.
第三句,我没有明白你写的意思呀.
第四句：i will succeed if the bright wisdom can be embedded in my mind.
第五句：In order to achieve my goal,i have been studying very hard for a long time every day.
第六句：i can still remember what Mrs. Clinton said to me ,she said you can make your dream come ture if you put your heart into it,which i will believe forever.
第七句：this is my dream,it is a young dream, but it is very bright for me.of course,the darkness will eliminate one day.
望采纳.3Q
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