作业帮英语短文求查错啊!
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英语短文求查错啊!
This is my alarm clock,It is blue and white.这里的Blue and white是要表达什么意思?蓝白相间?如果是的话请用blue-and-white,做为组合整体用.
It is not only very pratical ,but also a good friend of my life.这句有问题,不用这么复杂的句子,容易造成误解.可以简化:It is very pratical,and also a good friend in my life..
Because it told me to get up on time.这里不要用过去式,因为这是一个经常的常态的表达,同时不用Tell,用call或awake up好一些,改为:
Because it call me to get up on time everyday.或者 Becase it awake up me on time everyday.
So,I will not be late,It is very interesting,isn't it?这句本身倒没有什么问题.不过结合前后句我们只能看出它是很有用的useful,但没有看出Interesting,可能个人看法不同.后面你又改为 It is very interesting,I love my alarm clock.我认为如果能加上几句有趣的描述就更好了.比如闹铃声the ring,or the song.
好了,就是以上这些了,你写的已经很不错了,希望让你更完美哦.
再问： 亲爱的，我写了后面改的。谢谢你。你写的很好。
It is not only very pratical ,but also a good friend of my life.这句有问题,不用这么复杂的句子,容易造成误解.可以简化:It is very pratical,and also a good friend in my life..
Because it told me to get up on time.这里不要用过去式,因为这是一个经常的常态的表达,同时不用Tell,用call或awake up好一些,改为:
Because it call me to get up on time everyday.或者 Becase it awake up me on time everyday.
So,I will not be late,It is very interesting,isn't it?这句本身倒没有什么问题.不过结合前后句我们只能看出它是很有用的useful,但没有看出Interesting,可能个人看法不同.后面你又改为 It is very interesting,I love my alarm clock.我认为如果能加上几句有趣的描述就更好了.比如闹铃声the ring,or the song.
好了,就是以上这些了,你写的已经很不错了,希望让你更完美哦.
再问： 亲爱的，我写了后面改的。谢谢你。你写的很好。