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主要看看语法错误,拼写错误啥的,
Academic writing should include five parts.They are Introduction,literature Review,Methodology,Results and Conclusions.
There are four parts in the introduction.First is the need for the study.You should compare the previous studies and current studies and find out the differences and progresses.You should write two things.What has been done and what has not been done?And make sure your study will address the second.Second part is the purpose of the study.Purpose of study includes the purpose of your research or explanation of your research on which topic you are going to research as well as the motives of the research.The format should be “This study investigates…” Third part is Research Questions and Hypotheses.The questions should be general questions and the hypotheses should be specific.(For example,RQ:Is there any significant difference in students’ academic achievement between students of class A and those belonging to class HP:It is hypothesized that there exists no significant difference in students’ academic achievement between student of class A and class B.) The last part is the significance of the study.Significance of the study in thesis is the part where you tell how your study would be beneficial to specific people or parts of the society and how they could use it.
In the literature review you should write two things.What has been achieved and who has done what?Literature review includes three parts.First is Historical Background.You should write some special studies or omit it.Second is the Theoretical Background.You should present the theoretical frame in your study.Third is the Related Research.You should write current studies of the same area here.
Part three is the Methodology or the purpose of the study.In the Research Design part,you should describe your research.In the instrument part,you should write the measurements and scales etc that you applied in your study.Treatment is what you have done to the sample.And next are Data Collection Procedures and Data Analysis Procedures.The last is the Limitations.You should write the shortcomings of your study.
Next part is the Results.In this part,you should answer the research questions.
Last part is Conclusions.Implications for Practice are the part where you tell how your study would be beneficial to specific people or parts of the society and how they could use it.And in Recommendations for Future Research,you should put forward some advice to improve the study.And the recommendations should relevant to the Limitations

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Academic writing should include five parts.They are Introduction,literature Review,Methodology,Results and Conclusions.
There are four parts in the introduction.(The f)irst is the need for the study.You should compare the previous studies and current studies and find out the differences and progresses.You should write two things.What has been done and what has not been done?[And m]Make sure your study will address the second.Second part is the purpose of the study.Purpose of study includes the purpose of your research or explanation of your research on which topic you are going to research as well as the motives of the research.The format should be “This study investigates…” (The t)hird part is Research Questions and Hypotheses.The questions should be general [questions] and the hypotheses should be specific.(For example,RQ:Is there any significant difference in students’ academic achievement between students of class A and those belonging to class HP:It is hypothesized that there exists no significant difference in students’ academic achievement between student(s) of class A and class B.) The last part is the significance of the study.Significance of the study in thesis is the part where you tell how your study would be beneficial to specific people or parts of the society and how they could use it.
In the literature review you should write two things.What has been achieved and who has done what?Literature review includes three parts.First is Historical Background.You should write some special studies or (you can) omit it.Second is the Theoretical Background.You should present the theoretical frame(work) in your study.Third is the Related Research.You should write current studies of the same area here.
Part three is the Methodology {or the purpose of the study}/?/.In the Research Design part,you should describe your research.In the instrument part,you should write the measurements and scales etc(.) that you applied in your study.Treatment is what you have done to the sample.[And n]Next are Data Collection Procedures and Data Analysis Procedures.The last is the Limitations.You should write the shortcomings of your study.
[Next] (The third) part is the Results.In this part,you should answer the research questions.
Last part is Conclusions.Implications for Practice [are](is) the part where you tell how your study would be beneficial to specific people or parts of the society and how they could use it.And in Recommendations for Future Research,you should put forward some advice to improve the study.And the recommendations should (be) relevant to the Limitations