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Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning i

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Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident.Several days ago,my neighbo
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident.Several days ago,my neighbor family ate a bag of fake food from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and brought up what they had eaten as their faces turned pale.Fortunately,another neighbor passed by only to find the accident and immediately called the ambulance,which carried them quickly to hospital.After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped from death.
From this all of us have realized the importance of food safety.As some illegal business men are only interested in making profits in the race to become rich quickly,they seldom care about the necessary safety measures and hygiene or care what happens to consumers.They must be charged by law.Meanwhile I do hope the whole society shall begin taking actions to protect people’s life safety.
Yours
Li Hua
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5.第6句only前加are 6.第6句we→they 7.第6句which→what 8.第7句with→by 9.第8句whole前加the / our    10.第8句important→importanceDear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident. Several days ago, my friend Li Yue ate a bag of fake food bought from the local market. After the meal, he had stomachaches. His face turned pale and brought up everything he had eaten. Just at that time, a neighbor passed by and found Li Yue sitting painfully on the ground. She immediately called the ambulance, which carried him quickly to hospital. After several hours’ treatment he escaped from death.
From this we know the importance of food safety. As some illegal businessmen are only interested in making profits in the race to become rich quickly, they seldom care about the necessary safety measures or care what happens to consumers. They must be punished by law. Meanwhile I hope the whole society will act to stop this from happening again and the government will always put food safety in the first place.
                                                               Yours,
                                                      Li Hua