作业帮高手帮我看看,这段话有没有语病 谢谢啊
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高手帮我看看,这段话有没有语病 谢谢啊
The summer is the day that the Canadian hopes already a long time.The Canadian lake river is numerous, the natural resources protects all right.The time that summer come, the hotel of the lake area tour beauty spot will do an advertisement on various medium.Over there, you can swim,paddle boat,catch fish,drift,leap class.
Another activity of the summer plays golf.The golf still is the nobility sport up to now in the domestic.But in Canada, the golf should be regarded as an activity that most consumptions have to rise.Fish at Canada the license receive very easily.The Canadian is widespread to think the fish in the river in the close by lake is have the polluting, so they fish pure is for amuse.Snare to will appreciate once hereafter up the fish, put back again Shui-li.
The summer is the day that the Canadian hopes already a long time.The Canadian lake river is numerous, the natural resources protects all right.The time that summer come, the hotel of the lake area tour beauty spot will do an advertisement on various medium.Over there, you can swim,paddle boat,catch fish,drift,leap class.
Another activity of the summer plays golf.The golf still is the nobility sport up to now in the domestic.But in Canada, the golf should be regarded as an activity that most consumptions have to rise.Fish at Canada the license receive very easily.The Canadian is widespread to think the fish in the river in the close by lake is have the polluting, so they fish pure is for amuse.Snare to will appreciate once hereafter up the fish, put back again Shui-li.
The summer is the day that the Canadian hopes already a long time.要用完成时,Canadian要加s,The summer is the day that the Canadians have hoped for a lonr time.
The Canadian lake river is numerous.既然是众多,lake要加s.is改成are.
the natural resources protects all right要用被动语态.和前一句要用句号隔开.
The time that summer come come加s,'When the summer comes'is better.
Over there改成there就行了.
paddle boat前加动词
Another activity of the summer plays golf此句没有动词,is playing golf.
The golf still is the nobility sport up to now in the domestic.语序要调整,词性用错了
改成The golf is still a noblest sport in the domestic up to now.
an activity that most consumptions have to rise that改成for what
Fish at Canada the license receive very easily.改成：Fishing in Canada the license is received easily.
The Canadian lake river is numerous.既然是众多,lake要加s.is改成are.
the natural resources protects all right要用被动语态.和前一句要用句号隔开.
The time that summer come come加s,'When the summer comes'is better.
Over there改成there就行了.
paddle boat前加动词
Another activity of the summer plays golf此句没有动词,is playing golf.
The golf still is the nobility sport up to now in the domestic.语序要调整,词性用错了
改成The golf is still a noblest sport in the domestic up to now.
an activity that most consumptions have to rise that改成for what
Fish at Canada the license receive very easily.改成：Fishing in Canada the license is received easily.