作业帮四级作文求批改1.对于禁止在地铁和公交车上吃东西,有人表示赞成2.有人则表示反对3.你的看法 Nowadays,eati
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四级作文求批改
1.对于禁止在地铁和公交车上吃东西,有人表示赞成
2.有人则表示反对
3.你的看法
Nowadays,eating food has become a very common matter in the subway.There is a public debate today over whether should food be banned on the subway.
Some maintain that food should be banned on the subway because it may exert a great influence to other people.However,others believe that we can eat food on the subway as lots of people don't have enough time to eat breakfast at home.
As for me,I think we shouldn't eat food on the subway.Why I have the opinion like this?Three factors can explain this.First,someone eats food which has highly seasoned that let others can't bear it.Second,subway is so crowded that we can't eat food very easy which both harm the interests for self and others.Third,someone even brings drinks to the subway.If they are not on guard,it's very easy to spill out.
As far as I'm concerned,I agree with we shouldn't eat food on the subway.
求帮忙批改,并给一些建议thx!
1.对于禁止在地铁和公交车上吃东西,有人表示赞成
2.有人则表示反对
3.你的看法
Nowadays,eating food has become a very common matter in the subway.There is a public debate today over whether should food be banned on the subway.
Some maintain that food should be banned on the subway because it may exert a great influence to other people.However,others believe that we can eat food on the subway as lots of people don't have enough time to eat breakfast at home.
As for me,I think we shouldn't eat food on the subway.Why I have the opinion like this?Three factors can explain this.First,someone eats food which has highly seasoned that let others can't bear it.Second,subway is so crowded that we can't eat food very easy which both harm the interests for self and others.Third,someone even brings drinks to the subway.If they are not on guard,it's very easy to spill out.
As far as I'm concerned,I agree with we shouldn't eat food on the subway.
求帮忙批改,并给一些建议thx!
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1、common matter 这个说法没怎么见过,common issue较好
2、There is a public debate today over whether should food be banned on the subway.whether后是陈述句语序,应为whether food should be banned
3、 Why I have the opinion like this?这句有语病而且完全没必要,累赘,改一下下一句直接过渡即可～
4、最后给出的三条理由changlish比较严重,建议重写一下
1、common matter 这个说法没怎么见过,common issue较好
2、There is a public debate today over whether should food be banned on the subway.whether后是陈述句语序,应为whether food should be banned
3、 Why I have the opinion like this?这句有语病而且完全没必要,累赘,改一下下一句直接过渡即可～
4、最后给出的三条理由changlish比较严重,建议重写一下
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