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英语短文改错,麻烦在原句上修改下让我知道错哪里了,并解释一下原因,谢谢了
1.你的英语老师教得很好,你想成为像她那样的人。
2.如果你成为英语老师,你会尽力去教好学生,帮助学生提高英语成绩。
3.你会对学生很友好,课后与他们一起玩耍。
4.你现在要努力学习,争取将来成为一名好老师。

1.My English teacher is very good that she teache us,I want to ba a person as her
2.I will try to myself best teach students and help they improves English score if I become a English teacher
3.I can be good friendly students,play with them after class
4.I should hard study now,because of I want to become a good teacher
1. My English teacher is very good that she teache us,I want to ba a person as her
正确说法:My English teacher teaches very well. I want to be a person just like her.
前半的重点是“教得很好”,你那句是“她的人很好”
后半句as的用法不对。
2. I will try to myself best teach students and help they improves English score if I become a English teacher.
正确说法:If I become an English teacher, I will do my best to teach and help my students in improving their English learning.
"an English",不是 a English. “try to myself best”是明显语法错误。让学生学得好不等同分数高。
3. I can be good friendly students,play with them after class.
正确说法:I will treat my students as my friends and join them after class.
原句明显语法错误,“课后与学生一起玩耍”,是假设学生在课余必定去玩耍,意思不合情理。
4. I should hard study now,because of I want to become a good teacher
正确说法:I should study hard now, because I want to become a good teacher.
形容词应在动词之后,because 之后不用 of
再问: 为什么because 之后不用 of

“try to myself best”是明显语法错误。
后半句as的用法不对。

哪里不对呢
再答: because of 之后该是 something,而不是 I

to 之后该是什么,请你去翻翻语法书

like 和 as 用法的分别,一般语法书都有

不必在此详述!