作业帮英语作文修改请大家为我下面的英语作文挑一下错.无论是语法上的还是意思上的.Environmemtal ProblemsA
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英语作文修改
请大家为我下面的英语作文挑一下错.无论是语法上的还是意思上的.
Environmemtal Problems
As we know,now the environment that we live in is becoming worse and worse.The sky becomes gray,the river becomes black and so on,especially we can feel that it is warmer and warmer.All these tell us that the environment is polluted.
And the reaxon I think are following:firstly,people throw the rubbish awayanywhere.And the rubbish makes the water and road dirty.Secondly,the buses and cars discharge much carbon dioxide.Thirdly,many factaries discharge industry dirty water.
If we want to prevent the environment from continually being worse,we should take some measures:firstly,I think the main cause of the environmental problems is that people don't realize the improtance of protecting environment,so the first measure we should take is to let all people know it.Secondly,we should develop the scient technology,and reduce the tail gas or use other fuel.Thirdly,we need to plant more trees,flowers and grass.
I think if we try our best,the environment will become better and better.
请大家为我下面的英语作文挑一下错.无论是语法上的还是意思上的.
Environmemtal Problems
As we know,now the environment that we live in is becoming worse and worse.The sky becomes gray,the river becomes black and so on,especially we can feel that it is warmer and warmer.All these tell us that the environment is polluted.
And the reaxon I think are following:firstly,people throw the rubbish awayanywhere.And the rubbish makes the water and road dirty.Secondly,the buses and cars discharge much carbon dioxide.Thirdly,many factaries discharge industry dirty water.
If we want to prevent the environment from continually being worse,we should take some measures:firstly,I think the main cause of the environmental problems is that people don't realize the improtance of protecting environment,so the first measure we should take is to let all people know it.Secondly,we should develop the scient technology,and reduce the tail gas or use other fuel.Thirdly,we need to plant more trees,flowers and grass.
I think if we try our best,the environment will become better and better.
Environmemtal 改 Environment
去掉 第2排的 now.把所有is becoming 还有becomes 改成became
especially E大写 feel that it is 改成 the weather became .
第3排 All these 后面加phenomenon 现象
4排 reaxon 改reason ,And the reaxon I think are following 后面加 three ,away anywhere,the water and road became
5排 discharge much carbon dioxide,much 前加too,factories 不是factaries .
scient 改scientific
grass 改grasses
就这些了 累死姐姐我了 ...
去掉 第2排的 now.把所有is becoming 还有becomes 改成became
especially E大写 feel that it is 改成 the weather became .
第3排 All these 后面加phenomenon 现象
4排 reaxon 改reason ,And the reaxon I think are following 后面加 three ,away anywhere,the water and road became
5排 discharge much carbon dioxide,much 前加too,factories 不是factaries .
scient 改scientific
grass 改grasses
就这些了 累死姐姐我了 ...