英语翻译您好!我叫**,来自**,非常感谢贵公司能给我这次面试的机会.我性格开朗,善与人沟通,业余时间我喜欢看看书,听听

英语翻译
您好!
我叫**,来自**,非常感谢贵公司能给我这次面试的机会.
我性格开朗,善与人沟通,业余时间我喜欢看看书,听听音乐,或者在周末约几个朋友一起去爬山等.
我有6年多软件开发经验,1年多项目管理经验.并于2010年下半年参加并通过【信息系统项目管理师】考试.
熟悉软件生命周期,知道如何管理项目进度,以及引导团队成员积极的工作,
有良好的分析问题和解决问题的能力,以及较强的学习能力和钻研能力.
熟悉B/S项目开发工具及技术,熟悉软件测试及报表开发,熟悉Sqlserver Oracle数据库及EA等建模工具.
个人评价：
诚实,勤奋,团队合作意识和自学能力强,热爱软件开发.希望能从事一些具有挑战性的工作!
不错,

Nice to meet you!
My name is ###. I am coming from ### I really appreciate this interview oppertunity.
I am very outgoing. I have great social communication ability. I enjoy reading in my spare time, listening to music and climbing mountains with my friends on weekends. I have developed in software area for 6 six years, one of which I afforded the responsibilty of manager. Moreover, I passed the "Information System Program Management for Engeneers" examination by 2010.
I understood the valuable period of software, knowing how to associate with managing affairs and guiding team members to work together effectively. All above shows that I have effective abilities of analyzing datas, solving problems, absorbing new knowledges and exploring new items. Besides, I am familiar with the exploration of B/S projects, tests of relative softwares and figures, Sqlserver Oracle data bank and modeling devices like EA.
In conclusion, I believe I am an honest, dilegent, teamworking person who love software exploration. I firmly hope to get some challenge work.
Thank you.
你的叙述有一点点缺乏逻辑,我加了一点逻辑副词,但还是有点奇怪.就是先说性格优点比如开朗,再谈工作,又谈个人钻研能力,再谈工作.思路有一点点乱,最好在每一段讲自己优点是加入工作中的实例来证明.比如你说的钻研精神,可以在后面说上次我们要做###Project,你去Google Scholar 或图书馆找了N多资料,最后哪一点资料得到了充分运用,团队合作的结果如何.software上面我没什么发言权,这块儿我一窍不通.但我觉得面试还是有一定共同点的.我在面试前,我们老师就说面试官希望看到实在的东西,比如你的努力,你不同于他人的地方,你能为他们带来什么好处,这些也不仅仅是一句话说的事儿,要有具体例证.
啰嗦了一下个人观点,不对的地方请斧正.