作业帮高考英语作文请评分题目：feel homesick（以下为我写的） 不算概括20分满分 请评分要求：描述一次你想家的经历
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高考英语作文请评分
题目：feel homesick（以下为我写的） 不算概括20分满分 请评分
要求：描述一次你想家的经历
（1）时间，地点，起因
（2）你想家带来的影响
（3）你是如何解决想家问题的
Words fail to convey my gratitude to my family.My family is the harbour of my soul and the oasis of my heart,who safeguarded me whenever something bad happened and emboldened me when I was discouraged.It was my family members who lightened my heart and lent their hands to me when I was drowned in setbacks .
Memory has never faded out in my mind.Time flashed back to the day when I felt homesick at school last month.I was haunted by the difficulty from my study and life,so I refused to eat food and started to miss my home .Hence,I telephoned to my family.With my family members encouraging me,I summoned up my confidence and positively confronted my pressure.
From my angle,my family serves to be the beacon and catalyst to dissolve my icy heart,who has me soar and embrace the glorious tomorrow.
字数120左右
题目：feel homesick（以下为我写的） 不算概括20分满分 请评分
要求：描述一次你想家的经历
（1）时间，地点，起因
（2）你想家带来的影响
（3）你是如何解决想家问题的
Words fail to convey my gratitude to my family.My family is the harbour of my soul and the oasis of my heart,who safeguarded me whenever something bad happened and emboldened me when I was discouraged.It was my family members who lightened my heart and lent their hands to me when I was drowned in setbacks .
Memory has never faded out in my mind.Time flashed back to the day when I felt homesick at school last month.I was haunted by the difficulty from my study and life,so I refused to eat food and started to miss my home .Hence,I telephoned to my family.With my family members encouraging me,I summoned up my confidence and positively confronted my pressure.
From my angle,my family serves to be the beacon and catalyst to dissolve my icy heart,who has me soar and embrace the glorious tomorrow.
字数120左右
没看评分标准，但感觉这作文不错，尤其第一段用词能给人良好的第一印象，如无字数限制方面的考虑，我看至少给你18分。当然作文评分很主观的，完全因评委而异，
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