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We pick out two kinds of comparative products is:Belong to ETAM of clothing profession dress and belong to BANILLA of dining service industry COFFEE.The our promotion to two kinds of products method carried on an observation(time segment is November 26, 2008 to December 9, 2008) for keeping on of two weekses and got of contrast result as follows:
ETAM promotion method:
1、 On November 26-30, 1, 2008 years, ETAM carries on new style of become available in the market a promotion, any purchases ETAM arbitrarily 1 style or several products, all the 20% discount is special.
2、 On December 1-9, 2, 2008 years, ETAM promotes sales of form is:The dress of ETAM all product instauration the original price don't sell at a discount and purchase ETAM in the ETAM store for the first time arbitrarily a style of original price product can a time of participation samples a generation that gold coupon activity can sample gold coupon face value to 20-1000 the etc. promote sales the period doesn't can be used to sample of generation gold coupon(everybody's limit is used a ) etc. the sum arrive a value to purchase an ETAM product, etc. sum depreciate after price full 200 dollars again reduce 60 dollars.
Concrete process is as follows:
Purchase ETAM for the first time inside each big ETAM store arbitrarily a style of original price product
(Not usage generation gold coupon, arbitrarily price)
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Participate in a time of generation gold coupon to draw prizes an activity, all can acquire a gold coupon
(The generation acquired gold coupon the face value is 20-1000 dollars etc. is not)
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The usage generation in the ETAM store gold coupon, two times purchase ETAM original price product
(Time limited efficacy for promote sales inside the term, everybody's limit is used a generation gold coupon)
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(1)Usage generation the price of article after the gold coupon is still higher than 200 dollars again special reduce 60 dollars
(2)Generation gold coupon the price is bigger than purchase of ETAM the price of article then can be free to purchase
(The usage generation gold coupon two times purchases participation not to sample a gold coupon activity)
|
The generation gold coupon after arriving a value to purchase the customer pays to remain left over sum
我们选中比较的两种产品为：属于服装行业的ETAM服饰和属于餐饮服务业的BANILLA COFFEE。我们对两种产品的促销方式进行了两个星期的持续观察（时间段为2008年11月26日至2008年12月9日），得到的对比结果如下：ETAM的促销方式:1、2008年11月26日至30日，ETAM进行新款上市全场促销，凡购买ETAM任意一款或多款产品，一律八折优惠。2、2008年12月1日至9日，ETAM促销的形式为：ETAM服饰所有产品恢复原价不打折，首度在ETAM店内购买ETAM任意一款原价产品就可以一次性参与抽取代金券活动，可以抽取到的代金券面值为20——1000不等，促销期间可以用抽取到的代金券（每人限用一张）等额抵值购买ETAM产品，等额减价后价格满200元则再减60元。具体流程如下：各大ETAM店内首度购买ETAM任意一款原价产品（不使用代金券、任意价位）-参与一次性代金券抽奖活动，均可获得代金券（获得的代金券面额为20——1000元不等）-ETAM店内使用代金券，二次购买ETAM原价产品时效为促销期限内、每人限用一张代金券-使用代金券后的产品价格仍高于200元则再优惠减60元代金券价格大于选购的ETAM产品价格则可以免费购买（使用代金券二次购买不参与抽取代金券活动）-代金券抵值购买后顾客支付剩余款
We pick out two kinds of comparative products is:Belong to ETAM of clothing profession dress and belong to BANILLA of dining service industry COFFEE.The our promotion to two kinds of products method carried on an observation(time segment is November 26, 2008 to December 9, 2008) for keeping on of two weekses and got of contrast result as follows:
ETAM promotion method:
1、 On November 26-30, 1, 2008 years, ETAM carries on new style of become available in the market a promotion, any purchases ETAM arbitrarily 1 style or several products, all the 20% discount is special.
2、 On December 1-9, 2, 2008 years, ETAM promotes sales of form is:The dress of ETAM all product instauration the original price don't sell at a discount and purchase ETAM in the ETAM store for the first time arbitrarily a style of original price product can a time of participation samples a generation that gold coupon activity can sample gold coupon face value to 20-1000 the etc. promote sales the period doesn't can be used to sample of generation gold coupon(everybody's limit is used a ) etc. the sum arrive a value to purchase an ETAM product, etc. sum depreciate after price full 200 dollars again reduce 60 dollars.
Concrete process is as follows:
Purchase ETAM for the first time inside each big ETAM store arbitrarily a style of original price product
(Not usage generation gold coupon, arbitrarily price)
|
Participate in a time of generation gold coupon to draw prizes an activity, all can acquire a gold coupon
(The generation acquired gold coupon the face value is 20-1000 dollars etc. is not)
|
The usage generation in the ETAM store gold coupon, two times purchase ETAM original price product
(Time limited efficacy for promote sales inside the term, everybody's limit is used a generation gold coupon)
|
(1)Usage generation the price of article after the gold coupon is still higher than 200 dollars again special reduce 60 dollars
(2)Generation gold coupon the price is bigger than purchase of ETAM the price of article then can be free to purchase
(The usage generation gold coupon two times purchases participation not to sample a gold coupon activity)
|
The generation gold coupon after arriving a value to purchase the customer pays to remain left over sum
我们选中比较的两种产品为：属于服装行业的ETAM服饰和属于餐饮服务业的BANILLA COFFEE。我们对两种产品的促销方式进行了两个星期的持续观察（时间段为2008年11月26日至2008年12月9日），得到的对比结果如下：ETAM的促销方式:1、2008年11月26日至30日，ETAM进行新款上市全场促销，凡购买ETAM任意一款或多款产品，一律八折优惠。2、2008年12月1日至9日，ETAM促销的形式为：ETAM服饰所有产品恢复原价不打折，首度在ETAM店内购买ETAM任意一款原价产品就可以一次性参与抽取代金券活动，可以抽取到的代金券面值为20——1000不等，促销期间可以用抽取到的代金券（每人限用一张）等额抵值购买ETAM产品，等额减价后价格满200元则再减60元。具体流程如下：各大ETAM店内首度购买ETAM任意一款原价产品（不使用代金券、任意价位）-参与一次性代金券抽奖活动，均可获得代金券（获得的代金券面额为20——1000元不等）-ETAM店内使用代金券，二次购买ETAM原价产品时效为促销期限内、每人限用一张代金券-使用代金券后的产品价格仍高于200元则再优惠减60元代金券价格大于选购的ETAM产品价格则可以免费购买（使用代金券二次购买不参与抽取代金券活动）-代金券抵值购买后顾客支付剩余款
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We chose two kinds of products to compare with which are ETAM finery,belonging to the apparel industry and BANILLA COFFEE,belonging to the catering service industry.We had an observation duration of two weeks for the promotion means of these two products(valid time:from Nov.26th,2008 to Dec.9th,2008) and got a contrast result as follows:
The promotion means of ETAM:
1、 From Nov.26,2008 to Nov.30,2008,ETAM had a store-wide sale promotion on products in the new fashion.20percent discount were given when consumers bought any one or several products.
2、 From Dec.1,2008 to Dec.9,2008,the sales promotion means of ETAM was:All ETAM apparel products resume to the original price with no discount.Consumers who first buy ETAM products can draw a voucher for once by buying any product of the original price.The value of the vouchers can range from 20 to 1000.During the promotion duration consumers can use the voucher (with a limit one for per person) to buy ETAM products instead of money.The sum amount to 200 can reduce 60.
Specific process is as follows:
-Any consumer first bought any ETAM product of the original price in ETAM stores (without vouchers,any price)
- to participate in the activity of drawing a voucher,the value can be from 20-1000.
- to use the voucher to buy products of the original for the second time can use a voucher each person in the promotion duration
- the price is still above 200 after using the voucher can reduce 60 and when the voucher was above the product price the product can be bought for free
- when the voucher were used,consumers paid the rest amount.
We chose two kinds of products to compare with which are ETAM finery,belonging to the apparel industry and BANILLA COFFEE,belonging to the catering service industry.We had an observation duration of two weeks for the promotion means of these two products(valid time:from Nov.26th,2008 to Dec.9th,2008) and got a contrast result as follows:
The promotion means of ETAM:
1、 From Nov.26,2008 to Nov.30,2008,ETAM had a store-wide sale promotion on products in the new fashion.20percent discount were given when consumers bought any one or several products.
2、 From Dec.1,2008 to Dec.9,2008,the sales promotion means of ETAM was:All ETAM apparel products resume to the original price with no discount.Consumers who first buy ETAM products can draw a voucher for once by buying any product of the original price.The value of the vouchers can range from 20 to 1000.During the promotion duration consumers can use the voucher (with a limit one for per person) to buy ETAM products instead of money.The sum amount to 200 can reduce 60.
Specific process is as follows:
-Any consumer first bought any ETAM product of the original price in ETAM stores (without vouchers,any price)
- to participate in the activity of drawing a voucher,the value can be from 20-1000.
- to use the voucher to buy products of the original for the second time can use a voucher each person in the promotion duration
- the price is still above 200 after using the voucher can reduce 60 and when the voucher was above the product price the product can be bought for free
- when the voucher were used,consumers paid the rest amount.