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帮我修改下错误把 which do you prefer?Studying in university or worki

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which do you prefer?Studying in university or working in a job?
Why do you prefer studying in university?
Firstly,i think studying in university,i can have many free times.In those time,I can do a lot of things which i can not do in high school.
Secondly,studying in university,i can make more friends.We can study and play together.i think that will be a really good memories for me.
Finally,studying in university,i can study more knowledge.That knowledge will be my life's wealth.
Why do you prefer working in a job?
Firstly,i think working in a job,i can earn much money.For that money,i can buy anything i want to buy.
Secondly,through work ,I can learn more knowledge which out of books.
Finally,Through my efforts,I can get a promotion in my work.That would be a very happy thing.
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Firstly, i think studying in university (will allow me to) have many free time. (during)those time,I can do a lot of things which i can not do in high school.
Secondly, studying in university can (let me) make more friends. We can study and play together.i think that will be really good memories for me. (去掉a...memories 是复数)
Finally, studying in university can (enable me to learn) more knowledge. These knowledge will be my life's wealth.
Firstly, i think working in a job (allow me to) earn much money.(With) that money, i can buy anything i want.
Secondly, through work,I can learn more knowledge (than from) books.
Finally, Through my efforts,I can get a promotion in my work. That would be a very happy thing.