作业帮小学三年级英语作文《我》求批改
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小学三年级英语作文《我》求批改
ME
My name is ye qi,I’m nine.I have tall body,two big eyes,two small ears and a small mouth.I like bananas,yellow,monkey.I am a happy boy.
I have a big bedroom.bedroom have a telephone It grey,two desk It a brown a yellow,and two chair It black.
I have big family.My grandfather is funny and heavy.He has old face.He love apple.My grandmother is kindly old lady.She has big body.She love grape.My father is tall and strong.He has a big month.He loves pineapple.My mother is pretty.She has thin body.She likes peach.
My teacher is tall and thin.She has thin body.She To teach we English.My friend is cute and naughty.He has two small eyes and two big ears.He likes mango.
The pet is a handsome cat is me.It has big body and a long tail.It likes fish and mice.
I love family.
ME
My name is ye qi,I’m nine.I have tall body,two big eyes,two small ears and a small mouth.I like bananas,yellow,monkey.I am a happy boy.
I have a big bedroom.bedroom have a telephone It grey,two desk It a brown a yellow,and two chair It black.
I have big family.My grandfather is funny and heavy.He has old face.He love apple.My grandmother is kindly old lady.She has big body.She love grape.My father is tall and strong.He has a big month.He loves pineapple.My mother is pretty.She has thin body.She likes peach.
My teacher is tall and thin.She has thin body.She To teach we English.My friend is cute and naughty.He has two small eyes and two big ears.He likes mango.
The pet is a handsome cat is me.It has big body and a long tail.It likes fish and mice.
I love family.
I have tall body
虽然没语法错误 但是还有点怪怪的 改成 I am tall.
I like bananas,yellow,monkey.
monkey 可数名词加 s
bedroom have a telephone It grey,
it grey 主谓宾 缺少一个谓语 is
two desk It a brown a yellow,
desk后加s It a brown a yellow有点怪怪的 改成
This is brown and that is yellow.
and two chair It black.
改成 and two chairs It is black.
He love apple.
改成He loves apples.
还有很多 名词没有加s 第三人称也要加s
自己再看看吧
话说 LZ的作文好干瘪瘪的 毕竟你才三年级
多写点作文 多看点作文 多问问老师
(看我码了这么多字 就采纳我的吧
虽然没语法错误 但是还有点怪怪的 改成 I am tall.
I like bananas,yellow,monkey.
monkey 可数名词加 s
bedroom have a telephone It grey,
it grey 主谓宾 缺少一个谓语 is
two desk It a brown a yellow,
desk后加s It a brown a yellow有点怪怪的 改成
This is brown and that is yellow.
and two chair It black.
改成 and two chairs It is black.
He love apple.
改成He loves apples.
还有很多 名词没有加s 第三人称也要加s
自己再看看吧
话说 LZ的作文好干瘪瘪的 毕竟你才三年级
多写点作文 多看点作文 多问问老师
(看我码了这么多字 就采纳我的吧