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度假的英语Last week,my parents and i had a travel in beijing.with

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度假的英语
Last week,my parents and i had a travel in beijing.with the fine days we visited many places where
was beautiful and interesting.Certainly ,the deliciouse food never can be missed.we all enjoied the wonderful journey.But there was another thing which added much happness for me .There was a tourist who lost his wallet,and he had no money to back his hotel
上个星期,我和我父母去北京旅游了.那几天天气很好,我们也游玩了很多美丽有趣的地方.当然,美味的食物是绝不能错过的.整个旅程我们都玩得很高兴.但是还有一个让我更高兴的事情.有一位游客掉了钱包,没钱回旅馆了.
应该还没有完吧?你是不是帮他了?
还有,文中有几处不合适的地方:with the fine days we visited many places where was beautiful and interesting中,把where was改成that were,或者更简洁地说:...we visited many beautiful and interesting places.
enjoy的过去式写成enjoyed.