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Climbing is my favourite sport.I am very fond it,especially

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Climbing is my favourite sport.I am very fond it,especially in later autumn.One day early in the morning,my friends and I put our sports shoes and started off.After climbing for half an hour,we got at the top of the mountain.There we have a good view miles around.To the north,a big river crossed the city.There were much ships sail busily.A lot of beautiful trees,too.The sun started to go down,for it was time for us to go back.In the way back,we were laughing and talking all the times.We had a good time that day.
共有10处错误.
短文改错一般9个错,有一行是正确的!
1.fond it→fond of it
2.later autumn→late autumn
3.put our sports shoes→put on our sports shoes
4.got at the top→arrived at the top 或 got to the top
5.we have a good view→we had a good view
6.much ships sail→many ships sailing
7.for it was time→and it was time
8.In the way back→On the way back
9.all the times→all the time