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1,March 5th is my birthday.
It’s also a special day to memorize a great person -- Lei Feng. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning, I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school, I helped my desk-mates to repair their broken chairs.
After school, I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All of them hoped that I would be back again.
What a joyful birthday it was!
2, I have a best friend.
She has long，straight，black hair，big，black eyes and a small nose. She is very thin and kind，she is cute，too. Her English and Chinese is very good. She is hard-working.
Her favorite season is summer，because it’s hot，she can eat ice- cream. She likes playing the piano，reading books and singing songs.
Who’s she？She is my best friend ——Sun Mengqi. She has a very good English name，too——Angle 3,. Today is the National Day.It is our country＇s birthday. Now she is 56.I am very happy.
Today in the afternoon，I go to the park，people all look so happy. Someone is doing exercis，someone is singing the nation song. A little girl comes to me and say to me，happy National Day.I know she love the country，but I love her，too. Today is a happy day.
4,AM FLYING I looked at the sky a daze, like you want to have a pair of angel wing, white, you can fly the blue sky, but I still have to comply with the illusion of reality, fantas is of no use, I dream a dream when I put on white princess dres, long white angel wings, I flew up into the blue sky, raised a ray of smile mouth. This is my new ciassmate,Jack.He is the tallest student in our cias He has black hair and big eyes,so he look smart.He studies very hard ,he likes reading and piaying football.He is also good at swimming,he is the member of our school Swimming Club.
Jack is a poilte boy.He always help others if somebody needs help.For example,last Friday,he helped an old woman cross the road when the traffic lights is red.
5. In a word,he is very poilte and helpful.All of the teachers like him very much. Jack is a poilte boy.He always help other if somebody needs help.For example,last Friday,he helped an old woman cross the road when the traffic lights is red.
In a word,he is very poilte and helpfull.All of the teachers like him very much.
It’s also a special day to memorize a great person -- Lei Feng. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning, I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school, I helped my desk-mates to repair their broken chairs.
After school, I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All of them hoped that I would be back again.
What a joyful birthday it was!
2, I have a best friend.
She has long，straight，black hair，big，black eyes and a small nose. She is very thin and kind，she is cute，too. Her English and Chinese is very good. She is hard-working.
Her favorite season is summer，because it’s hot，she can eat ice- cream. She likes playing the piano，reading books and singing songs.
Who’s she？She is my best friend ——Sun Mengqi. She has a very good English name，too——Angle 3,. Today is the National Day.It is our country＇s birthday. Now she is 56.I am very happy.
Today in the afternoon，I go to the park，people all look so happy. Someone is doing exercis，someone is singing the nation song. A little girl comes to me and say to me，happy National Day.I know she love the country，but I love her，too. Today is a happy day.
4,AM FLYING I looked at the sky a daze, like you want to have a pair of angel wing, white, you can fly the blue sky, but I still have to comply with the illusion of reality, fantas is of no use, I dream a dream when I put on white princess dres, long white angel wings, I flew up into the blue sky, raised a ray of smile mouth. This is my new ciassmate,Jack.He is the tallest student in our cias He has black hair and big eyes,so he look smart.He studies very hard ,he likes reading and piaying football.He is also good at swimming,he is the member of our school Swimming Club.
Jack is a poilte boy.He always help others if somebody needs help.For example,last Friday,he helped an old woman cross the road when the traffic lights is red.
5. In a word,he is very poilte and helpful.All of the teachers like him very much. Jack is a poilte boy.He always help other if somebody needs help.For example,last Friday,he helped an old woman cross the road when the traffic lights is red.
In a word,he is very poilte and helpfull.All of the teachers like him very much.
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It’s also a special day to memorize a great person -- Lei Feng. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning, I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school, I helped my desk-mates to repair their broken chairs.
After school, I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All of them hoped that I would be back again.
What a joyful birthday it was!
2,
I have a best friend.
She has long，straight，black hair，big，black eyes and a small nose. She is very thin and kind，she is cute，too. Her English and Chinese is very good. She is hard-working.
Her favorite season is summer，because it’s hot，she can eat ice- cream. She likes playing the piano，reading books and singing songs.
Who’s she？She is my best friend ——Sun Mengqi. She has a very good English name，too——Angle
3,.
Today is the National Day.It is our country＇s birthday. Now she is 56.I am very happy.
Today in the afternoon，I go to the park，people all look so happy. Someone is doing exercis，someone is singing the nation song. A little girl comes to me and say to me，happy National Day.I know she love the country，but I love her，too. Today is a happy day. 1、 去掉the 2、 改为this 3、 拼写错误：exercises 4、 本文的时态最好采用一般过去时，因为是下午发生过的事情。
4,AM FLYING
I looked at the sky a daze, like you want to have a pair of angel wing, white, you can fly the blue sky, but I still have to comply with the illusion of reality, fantas is of no use, I dream a dream when I put on white princess dres, long white angel wings, I flew up into the blue sky, raised a ray of smile mouth. 1、 删掉a 2、 拼写错误：dress
This is my new ciassmate,Jack.He is the tallest student in our cias He has black hair and big eyes,so he look smart.He studies very hard ,he likes reading and piaying football.He is also good at swimming,he is the member of our school Swimming Club.
Jack is a poilte boy.He always help others if somebody needs help.For example,last Friday,he helped an old woman cross the road when the traffic lights is red.
In a word,he is very poilte and helpfull.All of the teachers like him very much. 1、 拼写错误：classmate 2、 拼写错误：class 3、 拼写错误：playing 4、 改为过去时was 5、 拼写错误：polite
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最终答案：略
解题过程：
It’s also a special day to memorize a great person -- Lei Feng. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning, I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school, I helped my desk-mates to repair their broken chairs.
After school, I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All of them hoped that I would be back again.
What a joyful birthday it was!
2,
I have a best friend.
She has long，straight，black hair，big，black eyes and a small nose. She is very thin and kind，she is cute，too. Her English and Chinese is very good. She is hard-working.
Her favorite season is summer，because it’s hot，she can eat ice- cream. She likes playing the piano，reading books and singing songs.
Who’s she？She is my best friend ——Sun Mengqi. She has a very good English name，too——Angle
3,.
Today is the National Day.It is our country＇s birthday. Now she is 56.I am very happy.
Today in the afternoon，I go to the park，people all look so happy. Someone is doing exercis，someone is singing the nation song. A little girl comes to me and say to me，happy National Day.I know she love the country，but I love her，too. Today is a happy day. 1、 去掉the 2、 改为this 3、 拼写错误：exercises 4、 本文的时态最好采用一般过去时，因为是下午发生过的事情。
4,AM FLYING
I looked at the sky a daze, like you want to have a pair of angel wing, white, you can fly the blue sky, but I still have to comply with the illusion of reality, fantas is of no use, I dream a dream when I put on white princess dres, long white angel wings, I flew up into the blue sky, raised a ray of smile mouth. 1、 删掉a 2、 拼写错误：dress
This is my new ciassmate,Jack.He is the tallest student in our cias He has black hair and big eyes,so he look smart.He studies very hard ,he likes reading and piaying football.He is also good at swimming,he is the member of our school Swimming Club.
Jack is a poilte boy.He always help others if somebody needs help.For example,last Friday,he helped an old woman cross the road when the traffic lights is red.
In a word,he is very poilte and helpfull.All of the teachers like him very much. 1、 拼写错误：classmate 2、 拼写错误：class 3、 拼写错误：playing 4、 改为过去时was 5、 拼写错误：polite
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是花落无言老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略