作业帮这段英语有语法错误吗?如果有,请指出：
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这段英语有语法错误吗?如果有,请指出：
There are more and more Korean Stars come to China.Lee Min Ho is one of them.He was born in Seoul in June 22,1987,Korean actor,singer,advertising model.In 2006,Lee Min Ho starred in "secrets of the campus"; 2011 in the Korean version of "City Hunter" actor Li embellish; 2013 in Korean idol drama "heirs" by the 2013 Best Actor Award for the Asia Pacific Baidu boiling point,at the same time in the SBS acting awards winning five awards.
There are more and more Korean Stars come to China.Lee Min Ho is one of them.He was born in Seoul in June 22,1987,Korean actor,singer,advertising model.In 2006,Lee Min Ho starred in "secrets of the campus"; 2011 in the Korean version of "City Hunter" actor Li embellish; 2013 in Korean idol drama "heirs" by the 2013 Best Actor Award for the Asia Pacific Baidu boiling point,at the same time in the SBS acting awards winning five awards.
There are more and more Korean Stars come to China.
第一句：come需要改成coming
He was born in Seoul in June 22,1987,Korean actor,singer,advertising model.
第三句：第二个in需要改成on（因为是具体的某天）,另外后面这半句最好单分出来一句（不然就在he后面加逗号,was前面加逗号,Korean前面加a挪到逗号中间,不过这样有点乱）
Lee Min Ho starred in "secrets of the campus"; 2011 in the Korean version of "City Hunter" actor Li embellish; 2013 in Korean idol drama "heirs" by the 2013 Best Actor Award for the Asia Pacific Baidu boiling point,at the same time in the SBS acting awards winning five awards.
首先英语里的分号没有词汇排比的作用,是用来分隔完整句子的.所以这里面的分号都要改成逗号.下面我直接把改好的版本写出来吧：
Lee Min Ho starred in "secrets of the campus",the Korean version of "City Hunter" actor Li embellish in 2011,Korean idol drama "heirs",which won the Best Actor Award for the Asia Pacific Baidu boiling point in 2013,and at the same time won five awards in the SBS acting awards.
不是很理解actor Li embellish是什么意思这里可能需要你再解释一下
再问： actor Li embellish本来是想说演员李润的，但现在看来好像不行，那么用英文应该怎么说呢
再答： 还是没太懂，这里说另一个演员是什么意思
再问： 这是这段英文的翻译： 有越来越多的韩国明星来中国。李敏镐是他们中的一个。他出世于1987年6月22日在汉城，韩国演员，歌手，广告模特。2006，李敏镐主演了“校园的秘密“，2011，韩国版“城市猎人“演员李润，韩国偶像剧“继承者们”，为亚太百度沸点在2013赢得了最佳男演员奖，同时获得五个奖项中的SBS演技奖项。
再答： 就是说他演的人叫李润呗 the Korean version of "City Hunter" as the leading man Li Run这句改成这样就行了
第一句：come需要改成coming
He was born in Seoul in June 22,1987,Korean actor,singer,advertising model.
第三句：第二个in需要改成on（因为是具体的某天）,另外后面这半句最好单分出来一句（不然就在he后面加逗号,was前面加逗号,Korean前面加a挪到逗号中间,不过这样有点乱）
Lee Min Ho starred in "secrets of the campus"; 2011 in the Korean version of "City Hunter" actor Li embellish; 2013 in Korean idol drama "heirs" by the 2013 Best Actor Award for the Asia Pacific Baidu boiling point,at the same time in the SBS acting awards winning five awards.
首先英语里的分号没有词汇排比的作用,是用来分隔完整句子的.所以这里面的分号都要改成逗号.下面我直接把改好的版本写出来吧：
Lee Min Ho starred in "secrets of the campus",the Korean version of "City Hunter" actor Li embellish in 2011,Korean idol drama "heirs",which won the Best Actor Award for the Asia Pacific Baidu boiling point in 2013,and at the same time won five awards in the SBS acting awards.
不是很理解actor Li embellish是什么意思这里可能需要你再解释一下
再问： actor Li embellish本来是想说演员李润的，但现在看来好像不行，那么用英文应该怎么说呢
再答： 还是没太懂，这里说另一个演员是什么意思
再问： 这是这段英文的翻译： 有越来越多的韩国明星来中国。李敏镐是他们中的一个。他出世于1987年6月22日在汉城，韩国演员，歌手，广告模特。2006，李敏镐主演了“校园的秘密“，2011，韩国版“城市猎人“演员李润，韩国偶像剧“继承者们”，为亚太百度沸点在2013赢得了最佳男演员奖，同时获得五个奖项中的SBS演技奖项。
再答： 就是说他演的人叫李润呗 the Korean version of "City Hunter" as the leading man Li Run这句改成这样就行了