应孩子英语老师要求,用英语写了一篇作文.因为英语水平实在有限,请行家斧正,免得被老师笑话.

应孩子英语老师要求,用英语写了一篇作文.因为英语水平实在有限,请行家斧正,免得被老师笑话.
My lover my son
My son is Li Teng.He is a mischievous boy.His 11 years old.He already was a junior middle school's student.
My son is lovable,commander-in-chief.Very is also small in him front,in rests tells the story to him,should say takes the story book to read the story,but he each time all wants own to look while listens to me to read,but one day,my surprised discovery,he could own look at the story book,but I have only taught him a simple character,when did he is know that many character.
Grows up day-by-day along with the son,on the kindergarten,has gone to the elementary school,concerns his story more and more to be also many,although he is somewhat mischievous,but more times I am felt he was more and more sensible.Sometimes holiday I must rest meet the afternoon nap,but he wants to look can the television,he be able to open very much the television sound slightly,feared affects me to rest.Also has very many intravenous drip,lets small fragment which I am moved.The son liked reading very much,passes the books broadly his aspect of knowledge also many.
My son is one has the very many merit good child,although inevitable has the shortcoming,but I hope him in the unceasing progress,comprehensive development.My son always is lets me feel the proud good child.I love my son.

这个是直接翻译的吧.很多语序不对.还有第一段应该改一下,变成长句子My son is Li Teng, 11-year-old boy who is very mischievous . He is a junior middle school's student , which enjoys his school life.
没什么时间帮你改.要是先给财富的话再@我可以慢慢帮你~