作业帮介绍一下英文personal statement的写法及注意事项
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介绍一下英文personal statement的写法及注意事项
An Example of a Good Personal Statement
I currently major in BA Business Administration at ****** University, which is one of the top 100 universities in China, the best university in my province and a member of the 211 Project of elite research-led institutions in China. My GPA average score is approximately 84, which puts me in the top three of my class. My English ability is good and I score highly in my language examinations. Although I will not take my IELTS test before June I am confident that I can score at least 6.5.
I am writing in pursuit of postgraduate studies in Human Resource Management. During my undergraduate study I took courses on: International Marketing, Strategic Management, Human Resource Management etc. Through my studies, I realized Human Resource Management plays the pivotal role in communication and therefore performance between a company and its staff. Thus, I want to specialise in this field, and build an exciting career.
With the ever-increasing development of the China economy, more and more companies will establish or grow their Human Resource Department to solve their operational problems. I know that from a recent survey of foreign CEO’s in China, most listed HRM as the most problematic area of their operation in China. It is clear that people management lags behind China’s economic growth and that companies seeking to become successful, perhaps even global brands, must develop their HRM sectors
As a fourth-year student who is grounded solidly in Business Administration I also have studied some electives of Human Resource Management on: Recruitment and Placement, Labor Relations, Motivating Employees, and Training and Development. In the courses, I enjoyed the principle that good management can promote the relationship between people in the organization and between an individual and the organization.
Whilst studying I have worked, first as an office assistant and then as a consultant in a large study-abroad agency. From my experiences I realized the importance of an effective staff-training programme. Also I found that I was good at and enjoyed team leading and I believe I have the personal characteristics of confidence, resilience and exuberance that would allow me to excel in HRM.
My area of special interest is ROI from learning and self-development, as I believe this area offers the greatest growth opportunities to both the employer and employee and because it is quite a new concept to China. For me being a HR professional offers the opportunity to give benefit to both the individual worker and the big company and this is why it is the most rewarding of business specialisations.
After completing my A-level studies, I know that I want to study mathematics at a higher level; I would like to explore the link between mathematics and financial behaviour (Economics, Business, Management)
Mathematics is a subject I became fascinated with in my college. It had intrigued me because I always get great pleasure from solving difficult mathematical problems. My A-level studies have provided me with a strong introduction. I now seek a greater academic focus and more extensive research opportunities by taking a university degree in mathematics.
As my studies have developed. I have realized that mathematics is the foundation of every science, we can use mathematics to solve many problems. I started to touch maths very early, when other children focus on toys I started to do some simple maths. One thing i remember clearly is when I was in Year 4, my teacher left my class a Year 10 level question as a challenge. I spent a few hours attempting to do it, but was still stuck on some stages. I never gave up. I tried to ask my mother for help, and after I got some tips from her, I totally understood this question, and solved it immediately. This experience made me more ambitious to learn more about mathematics, and was a catalyst for me to join the Maths Club in my City. In this club we got the best teachers. They did not just teach us how to pass the exams, but helped us to think about questions logically. Having acquired this habit, when I attempt a question I always try to find a logical way to explain it. After 2 years concentrated study in mathematics I represented my City in the national competitions for mathematics and I got into the third round. My parents always attach importance to my maths result. They sent me to a mathematics summer school every year, and I liked them because this led me to be the top math student in my school.
Outside Sixth Form, sport is my favourite activity, especially basketball. I like to play it with the local people, because I can practice my speaking skills by talking to them, and I was an active member of the basketball team. This further helped me to develop my interpersonal skills and leadership qualities. Each week, I spent most of my spare time participating. Also I can play the keyboard, and have a Level 4 certificate. During my double maths studies, the balancing act will prove extremely useful as I seriously dedicate myself to my academic study while also maintaining time for my hobbies and relationships.
Two years ago I got the opportunity to continue my studies in this country. It has been a fantastic experience for me; to study in England is a dream for lots of students and I have loved every minute of it. The people, the culture and the environment all sparked my interest in every day living in England.
My personal characteristics of hard work, dedication and commitment make me ideally suited to mathematics. I am extremely eager to learn and discover more about the world of mathematics. Beyond that my ideal vocation would be in the field of actuary. I know this will take a long time, and mathematics is the vital thing to reach the goal.
No matter where I study, I will pursue a rigorous mathematics course. However, I want to immerse myself in a cross-cultural experience in a place that fascinates me, based on my experiences, I know England is the place.
1.选择留学国家：
如何选择一个适合自己的留学国家,是留学的重中之重非常重要,一定要慎重考虑.去哪个国家留学并不是完全由家庭条件来决定的!之所以我这么说,是因为对于一个成绩普通,作为有限的学生留学,能申请到奖学金的机会是相当渺茫的,这样留学的话成本就比较高,家里要承担该学生的所有学费和生活费!因为学习好的,出色的人才毕竟是少数的,所以才会有选择国家看学习费用一说!
但是对于一个成绩优秀,能力很强的学生来说,是完全不需要来考虑这方面的!当然,因为可以拿到奖学金的嘛,如果是全奖（生活费,学费）的话你家里是一分钱都不用出的!即使是半奖,相信一个中产阶级家庭也是能承受的吧（你不挥霍的话）!那么基于你的情况（成绩优秀）,是完全有机会申请到奖学金的!
所以基于以上情况,个人建议：如果你的能力很强,对自己将来发展充满信心,并且是一个能吃苦的孩子,而且有足够的运气! 我个人强烈建议你除了美国那里也不要去! 美国!美国!美国美国!
首先我不是美国人,其次我16岁开始我的留学生涯,但是我还是爱我的祖国-中国!所以我自觉得对留学方面还是有一定的认识的!美国的好处想必你也清楚,所以我在这里就不用那些花哨的语言跟你介绍了,我还是针对一些你的情况,来客观的说说美国,主要会讲一些奖学金的情况吧（应该是你比较关心的方面）!
美国留学的优势多多啊!首先,全世界经济最发达的国家（幼儿园都知道）；一旦获得学生签证,就有机会工作,申请移民,家属也可同时赴美.留美回国市场认知度提高,竞争力加强,更有机会获得高薪高职位.
美国可供选择的大学是最多的一个国家（4000多所大学）,教育质量毋庸质疑也是全球第一!最重要的是：奖学金最为丰厚的国家仍然是美国,而且美国的奖学金制度也是全世界热门留学国家中最发达的!
(注意英国除了知名大学,比如CAM,OXFORD和LB,等很少会提供奖学金,教育是英国的一项赢利产业,性质跟美国是不太一样的.)
美国奖学金种类繁多,高校奖学金（校内奖学金）分为非服务性奖学金（Non-Service Scholarship）、服务性奖学金（Service Assistantship）和学校贷款（loan）三种.绝大多数的美国高校研究生院,都设置前两种资助.虽然并非所有学院的此类资助都能覆盖一年中的全部费用,但多数都在全部金额2/3以上.
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2.说说美国大学录取及奖学金的申请条件吧：
我不去评论你的家庭条件! 但就你个人的能力及学术背景来讲的话,还算不错的! 首先是你的成绩还算优秀,这点对一个将要读大学的学生来说是很重要的! 拥有有一个较高的GPA（学习成绩）肯定是好大学录取以及申请奖学金的首要的申请条件!其次就是你的能力,比如学生会干部,参加过什么社会活动,并担当一个什么职位. 这点可以体现你自身能力,从而增加奖学金申请的筹码!
那么笼统总结一下需要的条件：
TOEFL/SAT高分+优秀的平时成绩（IBT怎么也要100分吧,SAT I 1400分）+丰富的社会活动记录
能够帮你申请到全额
当然了出去读理科申请到奖学金的几率更大（如你选择的生物,可以读生物工程,或生物制药等专业,都是现今美国紧缺性人才,以后可以考虑移民……但我不建议,我们是中国人嘛,aha）
我通俗的解释一下SAT考试：SAT成绩相当于中国高考的成绩,是一个优秀学生需要完成的一项重要考试,一流学校必须要有,SAT是在非一流学校奖学金申请的重量筹码.
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3.如何规划学习计划
这是另外一个值得慎重考虑的问题!你的具体情况我也不是很了解,所以至于到底如何博亦,我还给你两方面值得去考虑的建议吧：
1）如果规划自己的学习计划
建议：从现在开始全力以赴准备T/S考试,要吃一定的辛苦,在能保证学习成绩的情况下,利用大部分时间（一切休息时间）认真准备T/S相关考试! 分别取得T/S的高分成绩,（相信你的英文水平还可以的,这些考试一定不会难倒你）然后立即开始申请!
（美国大学录取要提前一年.如：想要09年9月入学,就要从今年9月份开始申请,一共分3批录取）
1）把高中的课程全部读完,并且要取得优异的成绩：GPA要达到3.5以上（平均成绩85分以上）因为在高中阶段的数学知识是相当重要的,进国外大学后,数学部分学起来就不会很吃力!
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另外,关于个人写PS和RL的问题,我没办法帮助很多,因为我不是十分了解你的情况,并且说实话,我也没有精力去帮你写或修改……因为我不是这方面的从业人员!不过我可以给你些建议!
你提到了你个人特性里的5点,其中1、2、3、5这几点都是你的闪光之处,这些内容一定要都写进PS和RESUME里!
在老师推荐信方面,不一定非要找名家来写,最好找熟悉你,了解你的导师,或是在社会实践中结识到欣赏你的前辈来写!
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选择出国就是一种OPPORTUNITY COST,任何人（包括你的父母）的建议只能作为你的参考,最终选择权还是在你的手上,人生要自己做主!
最后我要说明的是,我并不是留学中介公司,你想找我办理出国事宜,我也没有这个能力!我只是担负起我对祖国的一点点责任,和义务并希望我的建议可以给你点启示,并且祝愿你能拥有一个美好的未来.能帮助一为好学生,我还是很情愿的!
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IM SO PLEASED IF MY ANSWER MAY HELP U TO SOLVE SUCH PROBLEM,BUT ITS JUS 4 A RE.
BLESSING U
I currently major in BA Business Administration at ****** University, which is one of the top 100 universities in China, the best university in my province and a member of the 211 Project of elite research-led institutions in China. My GPA average score is approximately 84, which puts me in the top three of my class. My English ability is good and I score highly in my language examinations. Although I will not take my IELTS test before June I am confident that I can score at least 6.5.
I am writing in pursuit of postgraduate studies in Human Resource Management. During my undergraduate study I took courses on: International Marketing, Strategic Management, Human Resource Management etc. Through my studies, I realized Human Resource Management plays the pivotal role in communication and therefore performance between a company and its staff. Thus, I want to specialise in this field, and build an exciting career.
With the ever-increasing development of the China economy, more and more companies will establish or grow their Human Resource Department to solve their operational problems. I know that from a recent survey of foreign CEO’s in China, most listed HRM as the most problematic area of their operation in China. It is clear that people management lags behind China’s economic growth and that companies seeking to become successful, perhaps even global brands, must develop their HRM sectors
As a fourth-year student who is grounded solidly in Business Administration I also have studied some electives of Human Resource Management on: Recruitment and Placement, Labor Relations, Motivating Employees, and Training and Development. In the courses, I enjoyed the principle that good management can promote the relationship between people in the organization and between an individual and the organization.
Whilst studying I have worked, first as an office assistant and then as a consultant in a large study-abroad agency. From my experiences I realized the importance of an effective staff-training programme. Also I found that I was good at and enjoyed team leading and I believe I have the personal characteristics of confidence, resilience and exuberance that would allow me to excel in HRM.
My area of special interest is ROI from learning and self-development, as I believe this area offers the greatest growth opportunities to both the employer and employee and because it is quite a new concept to China. For me being a HR professional offers the opportunity to give benefit to both the individual worker and the big company and this is why it is the most rewarding of business specialisations.
After completing my A-level studies, I know that I want to study mathematics at a higher level; I would like to explore the link between mathematics and financial behaviour (Economics, Business, Management)
Mathematics is a subject I became fascinated with in my college. It had intrigued me because I always get great pleasure from solving difficult mathematical problems. My A-level studies have provided me with a strong introduction. I now seek a greater academic focus and more extensive research opportunities by taking a university degree in mathematics.
As my studies have developed. I have realized that mathematics is the foundation of every science, we can use mathematics to solve many problems. I started to touch maths very early, when other children focus on toys I started to do some simple maths. One thing i remember clearly is when I was in Year 4, my teacher left my class a Year 10 level question as a challenge. I spent a few hours attempting to do it, but was still stuck on some stages. I never gave up. I tried to ask my mother for help, and after I got some tips from her, I totally understood this question, and solved it immediately. This experience made me more ambitious to learn more about mathematics, and was a catalyst for me to join the Maths Club in my City. In this club we got the best teachers. They did not just teach us how to pass the exams, but helped us to think about questions logically. Having acquired this habit, when I attempt a question I always try to find a logical way to explain it. After 2 years concentrated study in mathematics I represented my City in the national competitions for mathematics and I got into the third round. My parents always attach importance to my maths result. They sent me to a mathematics summer school every year, and I liked them because this led me to be the top math student in my school.
Outside Sixth Form, sport is my favourite activity, especially basketball. I like to play it with the local people, because I can practice my speaking skills by talking to them, and I was an active member of the basketball team. This further helped me to develop my interpersonal skills and leadership qualities. Each week, I spent most of my spare time participating. Also I can play the keyboard, and have a Level 4 certificate. During my double maths studies, the balancing act will prove extremely useful as I seriously dedicate myself to my academic study while also maintaining time for my hobbies and relationships.
Two years ago I got the opportunity to continue my studies in this country. It has been a fantastic experience for me; to study in England is a dream for lots of students and I have loved every minute of it. The people, the culture and the environment all sparked my interest in every day living in England.
My personal characteristics of hard work, dedication and commitment make me ideally suited to mathematics. I am extremely eager to learn and discover more about the world of mathematics. Beyond that my ideal vocation would be in the field of actuary. I know this will take a long time, and mathematics is the vital thing to reach the goal.
No matter where I study, I will pursue a rigorous mathematics course. However, I want to immerse myself in a cross-cultural experience in a place that fascinates me, based on my experiences, I know England is the place.
1.选择留学国家：
如何选择一个适合自己的留学国家,是留学的重中之重非常重要,一定要慎重考虑.去哪个国家留学并不是完全由家庭条件来决定的!之所以我这么说,是因为对于一个成绩普通,作为有限的学生留学,能申请到奖学金的机会是相当渺茫的,这样留学的话成本就比较高,家里要承担该学生的所有学费和生活费!因为学习好的,出色的人才毕竟是少数的,所以才会有选择国家看学习费用一说!
但是对于一个成绩优秀,能力很强的学生来说,是完全不需要来考虑这方面的!当然,因为可以拿到奖学金的嘛,如果是全奖（生活费,学费）的话你家里是一分钱都不用出的!即使是半奖,相信一个中产阶级家庭也是能承受的吧（你不挥霍的话）!那么基于你的情况（成绩优秀）,是完全有机会申请到奖学金的!
所以基于以上情况,个人建议：如果你的能力很强,对自己将来发展充满信心,并且是一个能吃苦的孩子,而且有足够的运气! 我个人强烈建议你除了美国那里也不要去! 美国!美国!美国美国!
首先我不是美国人,其次我16岁开始我的留学生涯,但是我还是爱我的祖国-中国!所以我自觉得对留学方面还是有一定的认识的!美国的好处想必你也清楚,所以我在这里就不用那些花哨的语言跟你介绍了,我还是针对一些你的情况,来客观的说说美国,主要会讲一些奖学金的情况吧（应该是你比较关心的方面）!
美国留学的优势多多啊!首先,全世界经济最发达的国家（幼儿园都知道）；一旦获得学生签证,就有机会工作,申请移民,家属也可同时赴美.留美回国市场认知度提高,竞争力加强,更有机会获得高薪高职位.
美国可供选择的大学是最多的一个国家（4000多所大学）,教育质量毋庸质疑也是全球第一!最重要的是：奖学金最为丰厚的国家仍然是美国,而且美国的奖学金制度也是全世界热门留学国家中最发达的!
(注意英国除了知名大学,比如CAM,OXFORD和LB,等很少会提供奖学金,教育是英国的一项赢利产业,性质跟美国是不太一样的.)
美国奖学金种类繁多,高校奖学金（校内奖学金）分为非服务性奖学金（Non-Service Scholarship）、服务性奖学金（Service Assistantship）和学校贷款（loan）三种.绝大多数的美国高校研究生院,都设置前两种资助.虽然并非所有学院的此类资助都能覆盖一年中的全部费用,但多数都在全部金额2/3以上.
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2.说说美国大学录取及奖学金的申请条件吧：
我不去评论你的家庭条件! 但就你个人的能力及学术背景来讲的话,还算不错的! 首先是你的成绩还算优秀,这点对一个将要读大学的学生来说是很重要的! 拥有有一个较高的GPA（学习成绩）肯定是好大学录取以及申请奖学金的首要的申请条件!其次就是你的能力,比如学生会干部,参加过什么社会活动,并担当一个什么职位. 这点可以体现你自身能力,从而增加奖学金申请的筹码!
那么笼统总结一下需要的条件：
TOEFL/SAT高分+优秀的平时成绩（IBT怎么也要100分吧,SAT I 1400分）+丰富的社会活动记录
能够帮你申请到全额
当然了出去读理科申请到奖学金的几率更大（如你选择的生物,可以读生物工程,或生物制药等专业,都是现今美国紧缺性人才,以后可以考虑移民……但我不建议,我们是中国人嘛,aha）
我通俗的解释一下SAT考试：SAT成绩相当于中国高考的成绩,是一个优秀学生需要完成的一项重要考试,一流学校必须要有,SAT是在非一流学校奖学金申请的重量筹码.
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3.如何规划学习计划
这是另外一个值得慎重考虑的问题!你的具体情况我也不是很了解,所以至于到底如何博亦,我还给你两方面值得去考虑的建议吧：
1）如果规划自己的学习计划
建议：从现在开始全力以赴准备T/S考试,要吃一定的辛苦,在能保证学习成绩的情况下,利用大部分时间（一切休息时间）认真准备T/S相关考试! 分别取得T/S的高分成绩,（相信你的英文水平还可以的,这些考试一定不会难倒你）然后立即开始申请!
（美国大学录取要提前一年.如：想要09年9月入学,就要从今年9月份开始申请,一共分3批录取）
1）把高中的课程全部读完,并且要取得优异的成绩：GPA要达到3.5以上（平均成绩85分以上）因为在高中阶段的数学知识是相当重要的,进国外大学后,数学部分学起来就不会很吃力!
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另外,关于个人写PS和RL的问题,我没办法帮助很多,因为我不是十分了解你的情况,并且说实话,我也没有精力去帮你写或修改……因为我不是这方面的从业人员!不过我可以给你些建议!
你提到了你个人特性里的5点,其中1、2、3、5这几点都是你的闪光之处,这些内容一定要都写进PS和RESUME里!
在老师推荐信方面,不一定非要找名家来写,最好找熟悉你,了解你的导师,或是在社会实践中结识到欣赏你的前辈来写!
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选择出国就是一种OPPORTUNITY COST,任何人（包括你的父母）的建议只能作为你的参考,最终选择权还是在你的手上,人生要自己做主!
最后我要说明的是,我并不是留学中介公司,你想找我办理出国事宜,我也没有这个能力!我只是担负起我对祖国的一点点责任,和义务并希望我的建议可以给你点启示,并且祝愿你能拥有一个美好的未来.能帮助一为好学生,我还是很情愿的!
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IM SO PLEASED IF MY ANSWER MAY HELP U TO SOLVE SUCH PROBLEM,BUT ITS JUS 4 A RE.
BLESSING U
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