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Directions: Some people maintain that universities are the best place for young people to receive higher education; other people believe that young people can be equally educated by taking correspondence courses or going to evening classes and open universities in their spare time . Write an article of about 250 words in which you compare and contrast the advantages and disadvantages of formal university education and informal higher education .Which do you think is more effective and desirable? Support your argument with appropriate examples or illustrations. Follow Your Style of Educated As we all know, higher education plays a really important part in our life .It decides the direction of our career . But come back to the earth, we get hard to understand .Now days there are many kinds of higher education, but which one is better ,formal one of informal one ? In my opinion it isn’t necessary to receive formal or informal education. No one succeed only receive formal and informal is not the best on . It depends on your sprite and attitude. Some parents think it is necessary to give their kids formal education. They send them to state school or some good schools . But China’s exam-oriented education has shortcomings , it gives students too much pleasure, affect interest cultivation .So advice parents start from interest . In this way ,informal education gets popular. Formal universities especially the good ones are full of teachers. There is no doubt about their teaching . Obviously , this is its biggest advantage over informal education . And some famous people may not received formal education when they are young . But they still got success. That ‘s because their never rust heart and dreams .A person who success or not not only depends on education ,but also heart . So hold on to you sprite and follow your style .Never go through the motions of studying . Just with your heart . 请老师详细批改 给予建议 指出错误 谢谢老师
解题思路： 如下
解题过程：
同学，你好！
解答如下：
1.“It decides the direction of our career .” 有点中国式英语味道。可改为：How we take up our career is up to it.
2. "But come back to the earth, we get hard to understand"有点中国式英语味。可改为：Referring to it honestly, it is hard for us to understand."
3which one is better ,formal one of informal one ?改为“which is better, the formal one or the informal one?"
4.“In my opinion it isn’t necessary to receive formal or informal education.”可改为：In my opinion, it is unnecessary to tell the formal education from the informal ."
5."No one succeed only receive formal and informal is not the best on "可改为：It is not that case where only by obtaining the formal higher education can one be successful. On the contrary, the informal one can do.
6."It depends on your sprite and attitude."中sprite应为 spirits
7.Some parents think it is necessary to give their kids formal education.中formal前加the.
8.They send them to state school or some good schools . 可改为：They offer them the chance to go to the public schools or some good private schools.
9.But China’s exam-oriented education has shortcomings , it gives students too much pleasure, affect interest cultivation .可改为：But the exam-oriented education in China has shortcomings。It gives students too much pressure, which affects the development of their interest.
10.So advice parents start from interest .可改为It is suggested that parents take consideration into the students' interest.
11.Formal universities especially the good ones are full of teachers. There is no doubt about their teaching . Obviously , this is its biggest advantage over informal education .改为： The formal universities,especially the good ones, are full of high-qualified teachers.No doubt that they are bestowed with good teaching. Obviously , this is its biggest advantage over informal education .
12.never rust heart改为determination.
13.A person who success or not not only depends on education ,but also heart .改为A person's success not only depends on his schooling ,but also his spirits .
14.So hold on to you sprite and follow your style .Never go through the motions of studying . Just with your heart .改为：Thus, hold on to your
ambition and develop your style! Never be ruined by the ill emotions from your studying ! Perseverance is success!
另：全文结构比较混乱。应分三段阐述：1.the advantages and disadvantages of formal university education。
2 the advantages and disadvantages of informal higher education
3. your argument with appropriate examples or illustrations
最终答案：略
解题过程：
同学，你好！
解答如下：
1.“It decides the direction of our career .” 有点中国式英语味道。可改为：How we take up our career is up to it.
2. "But come back to the earth, we get hard to understand"有点中国式英语味。可改为：Referring to it honestly, it is hard for us to understand."
3which one is better ,formal one of informal one ?改为“which is better, the formal one or the informal one?"
4.“In my opinion it isn’t necessary to receive formal or informal education.”可改为：In my opinion, it is unnecessary to tell the formal education from the informal ."
5."No one succeed only receive formal and informal is not the best on "可改为：It is not that case where only by obtaining the formal higher education can one be successful. On the contrary, the informal one can do.
6."It depends on your sprite and attitude."中sprite应为 spirits
7.Some parents think it is necessary to give their kids formal education.中formal前加the.
8.They send them to state school or some good schools . 可改为：They offer them the chance to go to the public schools or some good private schools.
9.But China’s exam-oriented education has shortcomings , it gives students too much pleasure, affect interest cultivation .可改为：But the exam-oriented education in China has shortcomings。It gives students too much pressure, which affects the development of their interest.
10.So advice parents start from interest .可改为It is suggested that parents take consideration into the students' interest.
11.Formal universities especially the good ones are full of teachers. There is no doubt about their teaching . Obviously , this is its biggest advantage over informal education .改为： The formal universities,especially the good ones, are full of high-qualified teachers.No doubt that they are bestowed with good teaching. Obviously , this is its biggest advantage over informal education .
12.never rust heart改为determination.
13.A person who success or not not only depends on education ,but also heart .改为A person's success not only depends on his schooling ,but also his spirits .
14.So hold on to you sprite and follow your style .Never go through the motions of studying . Just with your heart .改为：Thus, hold on to your
ambition and develop your style! Never be ruined by the ill emotions from your studying ! Perseverance is success!
另：全文结构比较混乱。应分三段阐述：1.the advantages and disadvantages of formal university education。
2 the advantages and disadvantages of informal higher education
3. your argument with appropriate examples or illustrations
最终答案：略