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I will write diary in English everyday from now on.this is a good way to protect my diary ,beacuse when someone read it ,he will can't understand me clearly,not all my colleague and friends good at english,they will do not patiently read these words.
I rent a room underground yesterday,because it is cheep and close to my office.i can go to my office in walk.
there are many houses near my office,but they are too expensive to me,i'm a poor man,at least by now.but i'm working hard for food and future.i sent a message to my girl friend tell her that i will go to bed early and get up early.so i'll be energitic when doing my work.
i printed the speech 'i have a dream',plan to read it every morning in this week.
in this room i'll start a new life.
there are lots of words i want to write,but i can't find the words i need.i will study english hard:)
I will write diary in English everyday from now on.this is a good way to protect my diary ,beacuse when someone read it ,he will can't understand me clearly,not all my colleague and friends good at english,they will do not patiently read these words.
I rent a room underground yesterday,because it is cheep and close to my office.i can go to my office in walk.
there are many houses near my office,but they are too expensive to me,i'm a poor man,at least by now.but i'm working hard for food and future.i sent a message to my girl friend tell her that i will go to bed early and get up early.so i'll be energitic when doing my work.
i printed the speech 'i have a dream',plan to read it every morning in this week.
in this room i'll start a new life.
there are lots of words i want to write,but i can't find the words i need.i will study english hard:)
I will write diary in English everyday from now on.This is a good way to protect my diary(diary我觉得应该改成privacy,因为你要保护的不是日记,而是你的隐私) ,beacuse when someone read it ,he will can't(我把will can't改成couldn't,英文里没有你的这种说法) understand me clearly,not all my colleague and friends (前面加are,固定搭配,be good at)good at english,they will do not(will do not 改成would not,后面再加个系动词be) patiently read these words.
I rent a room underground yesterday,because it is cheep(cheap,拼写错误) and close to my office.i can go to my office in walk(on foot).
there are many houses near my office,but they are too expensive to me,i'm a poor man,at least by now.but(我觉得改成While比较好,前面用了But最好不要再重复了) i'm working hard for food and future.i sent a message to my girl friend (加to ,表示动词不定式)tell her that i will go to bed early and get up early.so i'll(will改成would be 比较好) energitic when doing my work.
i printed the speech 'i have a dream',plan(planning,动词+ING在句首表示状态) to read it every morning in(去掉in,多余) this week.
in this room i'll start a new life.
there are lots of words i want to write,but i can't find the words i need.i will study english hard:)
还需加油哦.注意自己的表达方式
I rent a room underground yesterday,because it is cheep(cheap,拼写错误) and close to my office.i can go to my office in walk(on foot).
there are many houses near my office,but they are too expensive to me,i'm a poor man,at least by now.but(我觉得改成While比较好,前面用了But最好不要再重复了) i'm working hard for food and future.i sent a message to my girl friend (加to ,表示动词不定式)tell her that i will go to bed early and get up early.so i'll(will改成would be 比较好) energitic when doing my work.
i printed the speech 'i have a dream',plan(planning,动词+ING在句首表示状态) to read it every morning in(去掉in,多余) this week.
in this room i'll start a new life.
there are lots of words i want to write,but i can't find the words i need.i will study english hard:)
还需加油哦.注意自己的表达方式