作业帮麻烦帮我看看,这段英语有没有错误
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麻烦帮我看看,这段英语有没有错误
Good morning,everyone!It is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.I'm confident that I can succeed.Now I will introduce myself briefly.I graduated from Qingdao University.My major is about material.And I got my bachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 2011.I spent most of my time on study,and I’ve passed CET-4 during my university.In March 2011,I began working for a company named Wuhu Conch.I am 23 years old,born in Ningbo.So I love everything and everybody in here.And that's why I came back in May 2012.
That’s all.Thank you for giving me the chance.
Good morning,everyone!It is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.I'm confident that I can succeed.Now I will introduce myself briefly.I graduated from Qingdao University.My major is about material.And I got my bachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 2011.I spent most of my time on study,and I’ve passed CET-4 during my university.In March 2011,I began working for a company named Wuhu Conch.I am 23 years old,born in Ningbo.So I love everything and everybody in here.And that's why I came back in May 2012.
That’s all.Thank you for giving me the chance.
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Good morning, everyone! It is really my honor to have this interview. I hope I can make it good today as I'm confident that. Well, let me introduce myself now. I graduated from Qingdao University. My major is about material. And I graduated with bachelor degree in the year of 2011. I was used to spent most of my time on study, and I’ve ceritfied with CET-4 during my university time.In March 2011, I began working for a company named Wuhu Conch. I am 23 years old, born in Ningbo.
I love everything and everybody here. That's why I came back in May 2012.
That’s it. Thank you for your time
Good morning, everyone! It is really my honor to have this interview. I hope I can make it good today as I'm confident that. Well, let me introduce myself now. I graduated from Qingdao University. My major is about material. And I graduated with bachelor degree in the year of 2011. I was used to spent most of my time on study, and I’ve ceritfied with CET-4 during my university time.In March 2011, I began working for a company named Wuhu Conch. I am 23 years old, born in Ningbo.
I love everything and everybody here. That's why I came back in May 2012.
That’s it. Thank you for your time