英语短文改错Michael was walking along the street other day.Then he
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英语短文改错
Michael was walking along the street other day.Then he felt someone shouting his name.He stopped and looked around.He was Jack were running after him.Michael and Jack went to the same school and then to the same university.So they hadn’t met each other since then,They decide to have lunch together .They want to the nearest restaurant and sat by the table near the window.Then they talked about that they had done since they graduated university.
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Michael was walking along the street other day.Then he felt someone shouting his name.He stopped and looked around.He was Jack were running after him.Michael and Jack went to the same school and then to the same university.So they hadn’t met each other since then,They decide to have lunch together .They want to the nearest restaurant and sat by the table near the window.Then they talked about that they had done since they graduated university.
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Michael was walking along the street (+the)other day.
Then he felt someone shouting his name.
【the other day:在某天】
He stopped and looked around.He(It) was
【这里用It was 表示“是”,因为不清楚性别时不能用he或者she】
Jack were(were-\) running after him.
【这里running after him应为宾补或定语,宾补就直接去掉were,定语从句则在were前加who】
Michael and Jack went(had gone) to the same school
【这里去到同所学校是发生在过去的过去,所以应用过去完成时】
and then to (to-\)the same university.
【and then是并列,是the same school 和the same university并列,所以后一个to】
So(But) they hadn’t met each other since then.(标点错了?)
【这里表示转折,不是因果,所以要用But】
They decide(decided) to have lunch together .
【典型的时态错误,本文是发生在过去的,所以通篇的时态基本和过去有关】
They went(这是你打错了吧?) to the nearest restaurant and sat by (at)the table near the window.
【说坐在桌边是“sit at the table”,算是习惯搭配,因为介词的用法是很复杂的,所以你不必太纠结于为什么】
Then they talked about that(what) they had done
【about后是宾语,应用名词性从句,而引导名词性从句的就是what、where、who这些疑问代词,所以此处用what】
since they graduated(+from) university.
【graduate from,从……毕业,固定搭配】
我给你大致分析了一下,但是并不保证正确,剩下的,就交给你自己判断吧.答案不一定是最重要的,“为什么”也很重要.
P.S楼上说的很对,这篇短文好烂~
Then he felt someone shouting his name.
【the other day:在某天】
He stopped and looked around.He(It) was
【这里用It was 表示“是”,因为不清楚性别时不能用he或者she】
Jack were(were-\) running after him.
【这里running after him应为宾补或定语,宾补就直接去掉were,定语从句则在were前加who】
Michael and Jack went(had gone) to the same school
【这里去到同所学校是发生在过去的过去,所以应用过去完成时】
and then to (to-\)the same university.
【and then是并列,是the same school 和the same university并列,所以后一个to】
So(But) they hadn’t met each other since then.(标点错了?)
【这里表示转折,不是因果,所以要用But】
They decide(decided) to have lunch together .
【典型的时态错误,本文是发生在过去的,所以通篇的时态基本和过去有关】
They went(这是你打错了吧?) to the nearest restaurant and sat by (at)the table near the window.
【说坐在桌边是“sit at the table”,算是习惯搭配,因为介词的用法是很复杂的,所以你不必太纠结于为什么】
Then they talked about that(what) they had done
【about后是宾语,应用名词性从句,而引导名词性从句的就是what、where、who这些疑问代词,所以此处用what】
since they graduated(+from) university.
【graduate from,从……毕业,固定搭配】
我给你大致分析了一下,但是并不保证正确,剩下的,就交给你自己判断吧.答案不一定是最重要的,“为什么”也很重要.
P.S楼上说的很对,这篇短文好烂~
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