请教一篇英语改错一共有十个错误。原文：When the Second World War began,John who

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请教一篇英语改错
一共有十个错误。
原文：
When the Second World War began,John who wanted to join the army.He was only 16 years old,and boys allowed to join only if they were at 18.So when the army doctor examined him,he said that he was 18.But John's brother has joined the army a few days before,and a same doctor had examined him.This doctor remembered the old boy's family name,so when he saw John's papers he was surprising.“How old are you?” he asked.“Eighteen,sir,” said John.“So your brother is eighteen,too.” said the doctor.“Are you twins?” “Oh,no,sir,”said John,and her face turned red.“Mm,my brother is five months older than me.”

When the Second World War began,John who wanted to join the army.He was only 16 years old,and boys (加上were) allowed to join only if they were at (去掉at)18.So when the army doctor examined him,he said that he was 18.But John's brother has (改成had)joined the army a few days before(改成ago),and a（改成the) same doctor had examined him.This doctor remembered the old boy's family name,so when he saw John's papers he was surprising(改成surprised).“How old are you?” he asked.“Eighteen,sir,” said John.“So your brother is eighteen,too.” said the doctor.“Are you twins?” “Oh,no,sir,”said John,and her(改成his) face turned red.“Mm,my brother is five months older than me.”
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