作业帮求英语高手看一下作文语法有没有错,（很简单的作文）
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求英语高手看一下作文语法有没有错,（很简单的作文）
Myself
Hello everyone!I’m thirteen-year-old.I’m in Class one Grade seven.I’m thirteen-year-old.My birthday is on February 1st.There are four people in my family.They are my father,my mother,my litter brother and I.I have many habits.My favorite colors are blue and white.I love eat very much.So,I like all the delicious food.My favorite sports is swimming.And my favorite subjects are Chinese,math and English.Thats what I am.Do you want to be my friends?
有句话多了
Myself
Hello everyone!I’m thirteen-year-old.I’m in Class one Grade seven.I’m thirteen-year-old.My birthday is on February 1st.There are four people in my family.They are my father,my mother,my litter brother and I.I have many habits.My favorite colors are blue and white.I love eat very much.So,I like all the delicious food.My favorite sports is swimming.And my favorite subjects are Chinese,math and English.Thats what I am.Do you want to be my friends?
有句话多了
修改版（好吧我英语也很烂）
Myself
Hello everyone!I’m thirteen-year-old.I’m in Class one Grade seven.My birthday is on February 1st.There are four people in my family：my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.I have many hobbies.For example,i like swimming very much.My favorite colors are blue and white,they makes me look cool!I love eating very much.So,I like all the delicious food.And my favorite subjects are Chinese,maths and English.Do you want to be my friends?
再问： 你确定修改后的没语法问题？
再答： litter换成little或者younger。litter的意思是垃圾而非小。 hobby比habit好。habit指习惯，hobby是爱好。 逻辑太乱hobby后面直接加你喜欢Swimming就行。
Myself
Hello everyone!I’m thirteen-year-old.I’m in Class one Grade seven.My birthday is on February 1st.There are four people in my family：my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.I have many hobbies.For example,i like swimming very much.My favorite colors are blue and white,they makes me look cool!I love eating very much.So,I like all the delicious food.And my favorite subjects are Chinese,maths and English.Do you want to be my friends?
再问： 你确定修改后的没语法问题？
再答： litter换成little或者younger。litter的意思是垃圾而非小。 hobby比habit好。habit指习惯，hobby是爱好。 逻辑太乱hobby后面直接加你喜欢Swimming就行。