刚写的英语作文,A saying goes that “failing to educate the child is

刚写的英语作文,
A saying goes that “failing to educate the child is the fault of tha father”.it is a common phenomenon that many parents would likely to tell their kid what should be do ,and force them to change their habit,while ignoring kids’ real ideas as well as their personal hobbies,out of the intention that ,it may prevent their kids been hurt.Hence some young people complain that it is so painful to be forced to change their habits by the adult world.
There are also another kind of parents,they loves their kids for sure,but they seldom interfere kid’s ideas out of spoil,just let them do whatever they like at the most time,and stand out to point out what the kids done were wrong in time ,so as to avoid the coming mistakes.
From the point of myself,I support the latter one.Practice makes perfect.Only the lessons drawn by one’s own experience can leave deep impression.I am not intend to object that parents should make decision for kids.On the contrary,I consider parents should give the guidance to their kids at the proper time,so that lead their kids to a more flat life journey.But the degree is so important,to do unduly is out of question lead to negative effects.Parents should keep close attention to kids’ behavior ,and give suggestions at the proper time to some suitable extent,without interfere badly.
Have you ever read the famous American writing son and loves by famous writer lawrence In this article,Lawrence depicted a son clingged badly on his mother not only on career but also on personal loves.He can do nothing but lied on her mother’s emotional effect.He ever tried to go out of his mother’s emotional control,but in vain.Thus,after his mother died,there left no one for him to depend on.At last.he was left in the end naked of everything with the drift towards death.
To summer up ,I always hold the view that ,parents shouldn’t interfere their kids too much ,instead of force their kids to change their habit,but let the kids go free,and give guidance properly,if necessary.Wisdom comes by suffering.
由于写得仓促，有几处拼写错误：
son and loves 改为 SONS AND LOVERS
tell their kid 改为tell their kids
很多出HABIT 应该用复数
我也是N久没写作文了，最近要考试。希望大家给予宝贵意见，

高人!错误实在太多,改都不好改.单复数,主动被动,基本结构,都有错的.你干脆把题目发到网上让网友帮你写一篇吧,反而省事.