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选择其中一段,并修改英文
文章题目是： My Most Embarrassing Moment
1One day,I went to my cousin's house and saw her five-year-old son,and I asked her son whether he wanted to go shopping with me on Saturday afternoon.He agreed and said: "Well.Of course,aunty.I'd like to go shooping with you.″ What? Am I so old as to be called ″aunty″? I was more embarrassed than angry．
2Attracted by the plots in the book, I forgot the time. Involuntarily, a clerk had come to me.“Sir, would you like to buy this book? Please pay for it and read it at your home. Don’t read it here for a long time please.” said she.“Ok.How much is it?” I asked the clerk.“Two hundred and eighty yuan.” answered she."So expensive?“,"Yeah, it is the recent best seller.” said she.I am sure that it is the recent best seller,but I never thought its price was so high.In fact, there wasn’t enough money with me that time, so I felt embarrassed and ashamed.Finally I left the bookstore quickly.
3When I was about 12 years old,there was a public class,and teacher asked every student to wear school uniform for that class.But I found that I couldn't my uniform,then my mother told me she had sent my uniform to others.When teacher saw me didn't wear uniform for the public class,she asked me what happened,I told her the truth.At last,teacher asked me to wear a boy's uniform,then I followed the teacher's advice.That made me feel embarrassed.
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文章题目是： My Most Embarrassing Moment
1One day,I went to my cousin's house and saw her five-year-old son,and I asked her son whether he wanted to go shopping with me on Saturday afternoon.He agreed and said: "Well.Of course,aunty.I'd like to go shooping with you.″ What? Am I so old as to be called ″aunty″? I was more embarrassed than angry．
2Attracted by the plots in the book, I forgot the time. Involuntarily, a clerk had come to me.“Sir, would you like to buy this book? Please pay for it and read it at your home. Don’t read it here for a long time please.” said she.“Ok.How much is it?” I asked the clerk.“Two hundred and eighty yuan.” answered she."So expensive?“,"Yeah, it is the recent best seller.” said she.I am sure that it is the recent best seller,but I never thought its price was so high.In fact, there wasn’t enough money with me that time, so I felt embarrassed and ashamed.Finally I left the bookstore quickly.
3When I was about 12 years old,there was a public class,and teacher asked every student to wear school uniform for that class.But I found that I couldn't my uniform,then my mother told me she had sent my uniform to others.When teacher saw me didn't wear uniform for the public class,she asked me what happened,I told her the truth.At last,teacher asked me to wear a boy's uniform,then I followed the teacher's advice.That made me feel embarrassed.
请看看1-3哪一段写得比较好,并修改好那段语法有错误的地方,快来帮忙吧！
http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/1819328416240959428.html
大家快回答吧！两个问题一起采纳,快 答得好加分
1One day,I went to my cousin's house and saw her five-year-old son.I asked her son whether he wanted to go shopping with me.He agreed and said: "Yes,aunt.I'd like to go shooping with you.″ 亲爱的，表兄妹的儿子本来就应该叫自己anut啊∑(ﾟДﾟ)不是么
再问： 那没有其他要修改的部分吗,除了aunt这一点?
再答： 2I lost myself in a book last weekend in a book store, I even forgot the time.I stayed there for almost 3hours.Later, clerk came to me and asked“Sir,You can only choose books and buy them in our store.Don’t read it here for such a long time please.” said she.“Ok.How much is it?I will pay for it” I said to the clerk.“Two hundred and eighty yuan.” answered she."So expensive?“,"Yeah, it is the recent best seller.” said she.I was sure that it sold well recently,but Icouldn`t believe its price was so high.There wasn’t enough money with me at that time, so I could't buy it.I felt very embarrassed and ashamed.I said sorry to that check and then left the bookstore quickly.
再问： 那没有其他要修改的部分吗,除了aunt这一点?
再答： 2I lost myself in a book last weekend in a book store, I even forgot the time.I stayed there for almost 3hours.Later, clerk came to me and asked“Sir,You can only choose books and buy them in our store.Don’t read it here for such a long time please.” said she.“Ok.How much is it?I will pay for it” I said to the clerk.“Two hundred and eighty yuan.” answered she."So expensive?“,"Yeah, it is the recent best seller.” said she.I was sure that it sold well recently,but Icouldn`t believe its price was so high.There wasn’t enough money with me at that time, so I could't buy it.I felt very embarrassed and ashamed.I said sorry to that check and then left the bookstore quickly.