我写的一篇英语作文,帮我看看(本人初三)哪里写的不好

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我写的一篇英语作文,帮我看看(本人初三)哪里写的不好
一篇考场作文,要你对一个电台举办的活动提一些建议,说明你何时能来说明理由,并挑选你喜欢的两个项目,说明理由
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I prefer to join the English corner and watch English movies.These two activities ,which are held by your TV station,are both interesting and educational.Besides,they can also help us improve our English speaking skills.
I will join your activities from july 7th to july 17th,for i will have less homework than that i have now.
As for the items you list,i think they can be more so that we can enjoy ourselves during the time we are in this activity.
Finally,i hope the activity will be successful!
Thank you very much.

第一,语法错误
prefer to + sth/doing sth,所以应该是 I prefer to joining in the English corner and watching English movies.
参加活动,一般要加介词in,所以join in your activities
for i will have less homework than that i have now.z这一句than前后结构一样,要用省略,所以改成for i will have less homework than now就可以.另外,I hope the activity will be successful!的表达改成
I hope the activity successful/a great success!更地道.
第二,要严格按照题目要求.题目给出的要求是提出建议—何时来、理由—挑选两项目、说明理由,如果按照这个逻辑思路来写会更符合要求.

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