一道英语改错题,只允许改10处

一道英语改错题,只允许改10处
短文改错只允许改10处
This summer holiday,When I’m looking forward to,is coming.What great fun there is to go fishing!Play football is one of my hobbies,I can ride my bike,climb high mountains,or go swimming.Sometimes I can play with chess with my grandfather.How interested my holiday will be!But my father is always afraid I might drop into water,fell off a tree,or be hurt by a truck or something .He is afraid I would fight against others or taken away by bad men.But if I’m careful or polite enough ,What will these things happen?I must try best to persuade my father.
This(应改为The) summer holiday,When(应改为which) I’m looking forward to,is coming.What great fun there(应改为it) is to go fishing!Play(应改为Playing) football is one of my hobbies,I can ride my bike,climb high mountains,or go swimming.Sometimes I can play with(应去掉with) chess with my grandfather.How interested(应改为interesting) my holiday will be!But my father is always afraid I might drop into water,fell(应改为fall) off a tree,or be hurt by a truck or something .He is afraid I would fight against others or (应加个be)taken away by bad men.But if I’m careful or polite enough ,What(应改为how) will these things happen?I must try(应加个my) best to persuade my father.

第一行 when改成which
第二行 Play改成Playing
第三行 or改成and Play后的with去掉
第四行第一个改成interesting 最后一个fell改成fall
第六行 taken前加be or 改成and what改成How
最后一行best前加my
这是我做的 很累的哦~