作业帮英语作文修改（怎么改如下）
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英语作文修改（怎么改如下）
文章中几次出现read a book,变换表达方式和句型可能会好一些.
Something I want to do during the winter holiday
I want to read a book during the winter holiday because books are very important to us.I usually read a book in my spare time.For example,when I have nothing to do,I will read it.I also read a book before I go to bed,which has turned out to be right because they can improve my reading and writing ability.
文章中几次出现read a book,变换表达方式和句型可能会好一些.
Something I want to do during the winter holiday
I want to read a book during the winter holiday because books are very important to us.I usually read a book in my spare time.For example,when I have nothing to do,I will read it.I also read a book before I go to bed,which has turned out to be right because they can improve my reading and writing ability.
I want to read a book during the winter holiday because books are very important to us.I usually read 【改成enjoy】a book in my spare time.For example【可以改为for instance,同样的意思,明显这个词汇更高级】,when I have nothing to do,I will read【改为appreciate,有欣赏的意思】 it.
{ I also read a book before I go to bed,which has turned out to be right because they can improve my reading and writing ability.}这整句话前面那句是在不咋的,和你后面所用的词汇完全不是一个档次的,话说你几年级,后面的词汇到高中（turn out to be adj.)才会教.所以我决定全部改掉.As a result of it,I broaden my horizon.What's more,I gain various knowledge.At the same time,I improve my reading ability in a short time.
{ I also read a book before I go to bed,which has turned out to be right because they can improve my reading and writing ability.}这整句话前面那句是在不咋的,和你后面所用的词汇完全不是一个档次的,话说你几年级,后面的词汇到高中（turn out to be adj.)才会教.所以我决定全部改掉.As a result of it,I broaden my horizon.What's more,I gain various knowledge.At the same time,I improve my reading ability in a short time.