作业帮英语作文修改五三上的一篇范文,感觉写的很不地道,很中式,望指正,a mother paid her son for no
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英语作文修改
五三上的一篇范文,感觉写的很不地道,很中式,望指正,
a mother paid her son for not watching TV,but the son bought a TV with the money.
(这里的watching是不是做动名词,for not watching TV 是不是成分残缺?)
Experiments have shown kids want to be paid for their performance.
(前面既然有一个have shown 后面 want to 为什么用原型?)
I have been lucky enough to have a very good relationship with my parents.
(为什么不是 I am lucky enough ,而要用完成时?)
They have supported me and taught me a great deal about why and how to study
(原意我觉得应该是 ”他们经常（总是）支持我觉我大量的关于如何学习和为什么学习.“ 那为什么用完成时have supported .how to study 说的通,但是 why to study?不理解)
Whenever,I have diffculty studying
(是不是改成 diffcult studying problems 更好,或者diffculty in studying .diffcult 和 diffculty用法区别 )
kids will gain confidence and perform better
(perform better 可以这么说吗?)
五三上的一篇范文,感觉写的很不地道,很中式,望指正,
a mother paid her son for not watching TV,but the son bought a TV with the money.
(这里的watching是不是做动名词,for not watching TV 是不是成分残缺?)
Experiments have shown kids want to be paid for their performance.
(前面既然有一个have shown 后面 want to 为什么用原型?)
I have been lucky enough to have a very good relationship with my parents.
(为什么不是 I am lucky enough ,而要用完成时?)
They have supported me and taught me a great deal about why and how to study
(原意我觉得应该是 ”他们经常（总是）支持我觉我大量的关于如何学习和为什么学习.“ 那为什么用完成时have supported .how to study 说的通,但是 why to study?不理解)
Whenever,I have diffculty studying
(是不是改成 diffcult studying problems 更好,或者diffculty in studying .diffcult 和 diffculty用法区别 )
kids will gain confidence and perform better
(perform better 可以这么说吗?)
1. 是,watching TV整个做名词,无；
2. 断个句就清楚了Experiments have shown kids/ kids want to be paid for their performance.孩子想要被付钱而不是付别人钱.
3. 都能用；
4. 表示他们迄今为止已经为我做了大量工作,以后还会继续.学习目的和学习方法.
5. 如你所说.have difficulty in study/ in studying sth./ to study/ to study sth.
6. 完全可以,better 做副词修饰perform
2. 断个句就清楚了Experiments have shown kids/ kids want to be paid for their performance.孩子想要被付钱而不是付别人钱.
3. 都能用；
4. 表示他们迄今为止已经为我做了大量工作,以后还会继续.学习目的和学习方法.
5. 如你所说.have difficulty in study/ in studying sth./ to study/ to study sth.
6. 完全可以,better 做副词修饰perform
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