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求帮忙修改英语演讲稿When I was a junior high school student,my English

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求帮忙修改英语演讲稿
When I was a junior high school student,my English became poor.Because I was addicted to the online games.On the other hand,I think my English teacher didn't guide me to the right way.In front of the class,she said to me:" You dragged on performance in English of our class." And then I lost interest and confidence in learning English.And I don't know why we have to learn English .I don't know why we have to learn English for result.I don't know at what time ,I learn English just for pass the text.
Today,my English is poor yet.I still thank for everyone of my English teacher and my classmates.n the future,I wish I could learn English as a habit.One day,I will find English is so beautiful too.
When i was a junior high school student,my English was poor as a consequence of my being addicted to the computer games.Besides,I kind of disliked my English teacher who hurt me when she said that I dragged on the performance of our class in the face of all my classmates.So I lost interest and confidence in learning English.Now I stil puzzle over the question why do we have to learn English just to pass the exam or to be admitted into a key university?
At present,my English is stil poor.But I am grateful to my English teacher (这里可以加老师名字) and each of my classmate who have offered me help and encouragement in learning English.I wish I could fall in love with English and make it part of my life one day.At that time,I wil find how beautiful English is.
你的有几处语法错误,我给你改了,并且给了一些更高级的词汇短语,加了一些从句,所以句子有些长,如果不好背的话,你还可以自己删减一下.