Task:Correct any mistakes in the following sentences.

Task:Correct any mistakes in the following sentences.
1.Born in a small town in South China in 1968,he grew up to become a musician.
2.The girl is too young.
3.We entered the shop,and a saleswoman greeted us,and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,and the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them.
4.He visited all the famous historical monuments of this ancient city,and he also found out that the people of the city had to pay heavy taxes.
5.Shakespeare was one of the greatest dramatists.
6.The singing in the film is good and the actors act wonderfully well.
7.Jane is better at singing English songs.

1.Born in a small town in South China in 1968,he grew up to become a(a要去掉,become+职业不加冠词) musician.
于1968年出生与中国南部小镇的他长大后成为一位音乐家.
2.The girl is too young.（问题应该是出在too上……其实口语里特定语境也可以用的,建议改做very）
这个女孩很年轻
3.We entered the shop,and a saleswoman greeted us,and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,and the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them.（Chinglish很严重的……建议改成and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,of which the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them.
我们进入商店,售货员向我们打招呼.各种各样的鞋摆在货架上,价钱非常合理,很多顾客在挑选它们.
4.He visited all the famous historical monuments of this ancient city,and he also found out that the people of the city had to pay heavy taxes.（我觉得问题可能出在find out上,这个词我们学的是经过努力或者运算得出结论,而不是简单的发现,建议改为find）
他参观了这座古老城市所有有名的历史遗迹,而且发现这里的市民要付很重的税.
5.Shakespeare was one of the greatest dramatists.
（我觉得这道题的问题出在greatest上,可能出题人觉得英语的最高级有排他性,其实这句话我觉得是对的.）
莎士比亚是最伟大的戏剧家之一.
6.The singing in the film is good and the actors act wonderfully well.（这句话很难改……有一句话是The play is acting wonderfully well.这个剧本上演非常成功.可能是IN这个介词有问题吧……或者把ACT改成PERFOEMENCE.希望大家指教.）
电影中音乐很好,演员演出非常出色.
7.Jane is better at singing English songs.（be good at不能写成be better at）JANE非常擅长英语歌曲.