求高人帮我改英语作文我要参加英文演讲比赛,写了一篇关于介绍穆里尼奥的文章,增删都可以,语气要符合演讲,时间非常急!我把所

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我要参加英文演讲比赛,写了一篇关于介绍穆里尼奥的文章,增删都可以,语气要符合演讲,时间非常急!我把所有的分都压上了!
Jose Mourinho,a 48 years old man ,a cool man in my eyes ,a real man I admire ,a famous football coach in Europe,a miracle no one could surpass.
As we all know,it is difficult to be the No.1 .All the football coach have a dream of being the winner of the UEFA Champions League.Mourinho did it twice in the past 8 years with inter and FC porto.He was also a legendary figure when he was working in Chelsea football club although he didn’t win this glory .Now,Mourinho is the captain of Real Madrid,the most famous and richest football club in this world .Working with Cristiano Ronaldo and Ka’Ka ,they are trying their best to win the next champion cup .All of us are looking forward to the continuing story.
I want to be a man like Mourinho ,wild and intractable but never lose his own faith .He merge the faith into his each team and let his team stronger and stronger.“God,after god,me” Mourinho can despise his every opponent because he is always confident but he will never look down on them.
I want to be a man like Mourinho.Have a clear goal and work hard all the life.He never forget his dream and study hard till now,no matter being a translator or a coach.After grasping 6 kind of languages influently,he had had a firm foundation for talking with most of the football players in Europe
I want to be a man like Mourinho.Be proficient in psychological .Not only beat his opponent on the court,but also say something to influence others effectively out of match.
I want to be a man like Mourinho.Be responsable to the family .Love his family than other thing all over the world .Many years ago when he was in London,Mourinho always went to London’s street alone in the midnight just to buy a cigarette for his wife.
Mourinho has 3 dreams.The first one is proving himself to Catalan’s people that they made a mistake of unemploying him 10 years ago.The second one is winning all the glories in the football field .The last one is staying with his family peacefully at the end of his life .What are words?I think this is the best promise.A real man should promise to himself and never give up ,just like Mourinho.
I want to be a man like Mourinho,Not only a cool boy in my eyes,but also real man!

Jose Mourinho,a 48 years old man ,a really cool man in my eyes ,a real man I admire ,a famous football coach in Europe,a miracle no one could surpass.
As we all know,it is difficult to be the No.1 .All the football coach(复数形式) have a dream of being the winner of the UEFA Champions League.Mourinho did it twice in the past 8 years with inter and FC porto.He was also a legendary figure when he was working in Chelsea football club although he didn’t win this glory .Now Mourinho is the captain of Real Madrid,the most famous and richest football club in the world .Working with Cristiano Ronaldo and Ka’Ka ,they are trying their best to win the next champion cup .All of us are looking forward to the continuing story.
I want to be a man like Mourinho ,wild and intractable but never lose his own faith .He merge the faith into his each team and let his team become stronger and stronger.“God,after god,me” Mourinho can despise his every opponent because he is always confident but he will never look down on them.
I want to be a man like Mourinho.Have a clear goal and work hard all the time.
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再答： 我只能说你用了太多 I want to be a man like Mourinho 基本作文还可以