作业帮雅思小作文求大师修改,然后给个大概分数,求真实
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雅思小作文求大师修改,然后给个大概分数,求真实
The line chart indicate the trendencies related
to the changes of percentage that what proportion do the people in cities take
up in total population in China, USA, Korea and India from around 1970s to
2030. It is quite conspicuous in this graph that the information of the USA is
much higher than the others and keeps a relatively slow increase throughout.
For korea,although the beginning is lower(40%) when comparing to the former,yet the population growsdrastically in this period and will catch up with the USAin 2030 (70%).
We can see that China and india both
witnessed a similarly stable trend without fluctuations ,merely 20% from 1970
to1980. Interestingly, after1980, india surpassed China and started a slight
rise even in the future. The flat trend of China countinued until the dramatic
increment of population in cities during the period of 1980 to 199 and also exceeded
the india in1995（both30%） approximately. However,according to the line,the ratio will be slower in
2decades.
The line chart indicate the trendencies related
to the changes of percentage that what proportion do the people in cities take
up in total population in China, USA, Korea and India from around 1970s to
2030. It is quite conspicuous in this graph that the information of the USA is
much higher than the others and keeps a relatively slow increase throughout.
For korea,although the beginning is lower(40%) when comparing to the former,yet the population growsdrastically in this period and will catch up with the USAin 2030 (70%).
We can see that China and india both
witnessed a similarly stable trend without fluctuations ,merely 20% from 1970
to1980. Interestingly, after1980, india surpassed China and started a slight
rise even in the future. The flat trend of China countinued until the dramatic
increment of population in cities during the period of 1980 to 199 and also exceeded
the india in1995（both30%） approximately. However,according to the line,the ratio will be slower in
2decades.
我觉得值90分.