作业帮请问哪一篇好点,并改正第一篇,
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请问哪一篇好点,并改正第一篇,
【no1】
Nowdays,some students don't attach importance to correct writing when they learn English,so,these students always make some wrong in their article,causing it hard for us to understand its meaning,producing misunderstand.
I think,it has mainly arisen from two following factors.In the first place,these students focus their attention on persuing（pursuing） speed of writing,ignoring correct spell（ing）,in the next place,they may think that these wrongs don't hinder people to unerstand it clearly,so these students never pay attention to the spell（ing).
I think,as far as these students are concerned,they should get down to spelling,and slow down their speed of writing,by doing which can they develop their level of writing,and enables people to understand their articles easily
【no2】如图
【no1】
Nowdays,some students don't attach importance to correct writing when they learn English,so,these students always make some wrong in their article,causing it hard for us to understand its meaning,producing misunderstand.
I think,it has mainly arisen from two following factors.In the first place,these students focus their attention on persuing（pursuing） speed of writing,ignoring correct spell（ing）,in the next place,they may think that these wrongs don't hinder people to unerstand it clearly,so these students never pay attention to the spell（ing).
I think,as far as these students are concerned,they should get down to spelling,and slow down their speed of writing,by doing which can they develop their level of writing,and enables people to understand their articles easily
【no2】如图
第二个绝对比第一个好 但是两个都有很多语法,字词错误
第一个改正：
Nowday, some students don't see the importance of using correct language when they learn English. So, these students always make errors in their writing. The errors could make it difficult for the readers to fully understand or could cause misunderstandings.
I believe that the problem has arisen mainly due to two following factors -- speed writing and spelling errors. Firstly, it is likely that these students often rushes when writing, ignoring correct spelling. They focus on the speed of writing possibly because of the time limit in tests or carelessness. Secondly, they may think that these spelling errors are trival and won't hinder people's understanding. Therefore, these students never pay attention to the spelling.
In my opinion, these students should get down to spelling and slow down their speed of writing for their own good. By doing those, they can develop their level of writing, and facilitate readers to understand their writtings.
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第一个改正：
Nowday, some students don't see the importance of using correct language when they learn English. So, these students always make errors in their writing. The errors could make it difficult for the readers to fully understand or could cause misunderstandings.
I believe that the problem has arisen mainly due to two following factors -- speed writing and spelling errors. Firstly, it is likely that these students often rushes when writing, ignoring correct spelling. They focus on the speed of writing possibly because of the time limit in tests or carelessness. Secondly, they may think that these spelling errors are trival and won't hinder people's understanding. Therefore, these students never pay attention to the spelling.
In my opinion, these students should get down to spelling and slow down their speed of writing for their own good. By doing those, they can develop their level of writing, and facilitate readers to understand their writtings.
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