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我修改了一篇英语作文（阿拉丁和神灯）请大家再帮我修改一下!
Long longago,there was a man and his name is Aladdin.His father died.So he lived with hismum.But he is a lazy person.He didn not like working all day and he alwayswith his friends played in the market.He and his mother are very poor and they often felt hungry.But Aladdin neverwork ,and do not help his mother.
One day,a manclaiming to be his uncle brought the Aladdin a cave ,the cave would like touse Aladdin 's lamp take .Aladdin look down to the cave ,which is full ofglittering treasure Then Aladdin found himself in danger.Just be prepared toescape ,but found the hole has been plugged up .
The fact was :Uncle Abba That was not Aladdin 's Bazar.He was a magician from Morocco ,he wanted to find a light lamp.He knew thelamp an Arab city in the vicinity of a magical underground garden ,this was theonly city where a poor child can lodge into the garden to find the lamp,theboy 's name is Aladdin .
The hole wasblocked.And the magician went to Africa to his home .Aladdin rubbed the lamp ,he appeared in front of a vast expanse of things that looked like a monster ,he was in fact lamp.Finally ,to help the Aladdin 's lamp ,so he had a castleand a princess
Long longago,there was a man and his name is Aladdin.His father died.So he lived with hismum.But he is a lazy person.He didn not like working all day and he alwayswith his friends played in the market.He and his mother are very poor and they often felt hungry.But Aladdin neverwork ,and do not help his mother.
One day,a manclaiming to be his uncle brought the Aladdin a cave ,the cave would like touse Aladdin 's lamp take .Aladdin look down to the cave ,which is full ofglittering treasure Then Aladdin found himself in danger.Just be prepared toescape ,but found the hole has been plugged up .
The fact was :Uncle Abba That was not Aladdin 's Bazar.He was a magician from Morocco ,he wanted to find a light lamp.He knew thelamp an Arab city in the vicinity of a magical underground garden ,this was theonly city where a poor child can lodge into the garden to find the lamp,theboy 's name is Aladdin .
The hole wasblocked.And the magician went to Africa to his home .Aladdin rubbed the lamp ,he appeared in front of a vast expanse of things that looked like a monster ,he was in fact lamp.Finally ,to help the Aladdin 's lamp ,so he had a castleand a princess
once upon the time,there was a man named Aladin.Aladin lived with his mother.His father died when Aladin was young.Aladdin is lazy,and didn't like work at all.He likes to spend time playing with his friends on market.His family have suffered from poverty and hunger.Still,Aladin didn't willing to work and help his family.
嗯 先改一段 你同意改悬赏值 我就继续改 肿么样?^ 0
突然看了一下你的财富值.看完整个人都不好了 T ^ T
嗯 先改一段 你同意改悬赏值 我就继续改 肿么样?^ 0
突然看了一下你的财富值.看完整个人都不好了 T ^ T