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The Feeling of The Australia's Trip
Australia is a charming country. The cultrue of this country is very wonderful. I was very happy that I can go to Australia. This trip made me excited.
There were many kinds of plants andfresh air in Australia . It provided a good environment for wildlife. We can see many birds everywhere in Australia,and we can also see many bright stars in the sky at night,that was really beautiful.
When we went camping,the life is very full. We had different activities every day,even though sometimes it was tough,we can get many intererts from that and our physical ability can be trained greatly. It was an excellent chance for us to learn team spirit. The trip made me stronger in mind and learn to be independent.
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The Feeling of The Australia's Trip
Australia is a charming country. The cultrue of this country is very wonderful. I was very happy that I can go to Australia. This trip made me excited.
There were many kinds of plants andfresh air in Australia . It provided a good environment for wildlife. We can see many birds everywhere in Australia,and we can also see many bright stars in the sky at night,that was really beautiful.
When we went camping,the life is very full. We had different activities every day,even though sometimes it was tough,we can get many intererts from that and our physical ability can be trained greatly. It was an excellent chance for us to learn team spirit. The trip made me stronger in mind and learn to be independent.
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The Trip to Australia
Australia is a charming country.The cultrue of this country is very wonderful.I was very happy that I could go to Australia.This trip made me excited.
There were many kinds of plants and the air is fresh in Australia .It provided a good environment for wildlife.We could see many birds everywhere in Australia,and we could also see many bright stars in the sky at night,which was really beautiful.
When we went camping,the life was very full.We had different activities every day,even though sometimes it was tough,we felt they were very intererting.Our physical ability could be trained greatly.It was an excellent chance for us to learn team spirit.The trip made me stronger in mind and I learn to be independent.
Australia is a charming country.The cultrue of this country is very wonderful.I was very happy that I could go to Australia.This trip made me excited.
There were many kinds of plants and the air is fresh in Australia .It provided a good environment for wildlife.We could see many birds everywhere in Australia,and we could also see many bright stars in the sky at night,which was really beautiful.
When we went camping,the life was very full.We had different activities every day,even though sometimes it was tough,we felt they were very intererting.Our physical ability could be trained greatly.It was an excellent chance for us to learn team spirit.The trip made me stronger in mind and I learn to be independent.