作业帮求各位大侠改下我的作文.我的英语巨烂.希望不要见笑啊!
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求各位大侠改下我的作文.我的英语巨烂.希望不要见笑啊!
Views on newspapers
Recently student of our school have made survey of “views on newspapers”.The people whom we interested have two different opinions.
The table shows 45percent of the people do some reading by newspapers.
They are of the opinion that they read newspapers convenient.It is clever of it is reads newspapers.
55percent of the people don’t like reading newspapers.Because the newspapers around the information so slowly.
And the newspapers are not lively.
In a word,the newspapers has advantages and disadvantages.
That we do not have anything are perfect in the whole world.
Views on newspapers
Recently student of our school have made survey of “views on newspapers”.The people whom we interested have two different opinions.
The table shows 45percent of the people do some reading by newspapers.
They are of the opinion that they read newspapers convenient.It is clever of it is reads newspapers.
55percent of the people don’t like reading newspapers.Because the newspapers around the information so slowly.
And the newspapers are not lively.
In a word,the newspapers has advantages and disadvantages.
That we do not have anything are perfect in the whole world.
Views on newspapers
Recently student of our school have (此处要不改成students,要不改have为has）made （加入a比较好）survey of “views on newspapers”. The people whom we interested （这里是感兴趣么?还是采访 interviewed）have two different opinions.
The table shows 45percent of the people do some reading by （by改成on）newspapers.
They are of the opinion that they read newspapers convenient. It is clever of it is reads newspapers.（前句话整个改了,To their opinion, it is convenient for them to do some reading on the newspapers. 后一句不太明白.==!）
55percent of the people don’t like reading newspapers. Because the newspapers around the information so slowly.(Because it is too slow for the newspapers to update the informations.)
And(改为Besides) the newspapers are not lively.
In a word, the newspapers has（改为 have their） advantages and disadvantages.
That we do not have anything are perfect in the whole world.（整句改为 There's nothing perfect we have in the world.)
尽可能的保留您的原作进行了修改.希望.满意.
再问： It is clever of it is reads newspapers. 愿意是读书使人思考，激发人的兴趣。 我不会表达啊。 谢谢。
再答： Reading can make people thoughtful and inspire one's interests.
Recently student of our school have (此处要不改成students,要不改have为has）made （加入a比较好）survey of “views on newspapers”. The people whom we interested （这里是感兴趣么?还是采访 interviewed）have two different opinions.
The table shows 45percent of the people do some reading by （by改成on）newspapers.
They are of the opinion that they read newspapers convenient. It is clever of it is reads newspapers.（前句话整个改了,To their opinion, it is convenient for them to do some reading on the newspapers. 后一句不太明白.==!）
55percent of the people don’t like reading newspapers. Because the newspapers around the information so slowly.(Because it is too slow for the newspapers to update the informations.)
And(改为Besides) the newspapers are not lively.
In a word, the newspapers has（改为 have their） advantages and disadvantages.
That we do not have anything are perfect in the whole world.（整句改为 There's nothing perfect we have in the world.)
尽可能的保留您的原作进行了修改.希望.满意.
再问： It is clever of it is reads newspapers. 愿意是读书使人思考，激发人的兴趣。 我不会表达啊。 谢谢。
再答： Reading can make people thoughtful and inspire one's interests.