作业帮帮我改改这篇ENGLISH(英文)有哪些错,麻烦大家了.尽量说说错的原因和怎样修改.
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帮我改改这篇ENGLISH(英文)有哪些错,麻烦大家了.尽量说说错的原因和怎样修改.
hello,ereryone,let me introduce myself,my name is Leung Eddy ,
you can call me Eddy Chak .I live in Prince Edward ,i work in
Prince Edward ,and i study in Prince Edward.so ererybody say me
lucky that so near to do ererything.i think so,too.and i think
the best is i can save many money.
i like play volleyball ,and sometimes i play in Fa Hui Park,i also like play computer games ,but i had not play that for a long time when i work out.
my dream is go to Traveled in China ,now i had been guangdong many place,i think traveled most in need many many money ,so i had work hard to money,
and save in bank to achieve that.i will carry on.
That's all,thank you.
hello,ereryone,let me introduce myself,my name is Leung Eddy ,
you can call me Eddy Chak .I live in Prince Edward ,i work in
Prince Edward ,and i study in Prince Edward.so ererybody say me
lucky that so near to do ererything.i think so,too.and i think
the best is i can save many money.
i like play volleyball ,and sometimes i play in Fa Hui Park,i also like play computer games ,but i had not play that for a long time when i work out.
my dream is go to Traveled in China ,now i had been guangdong many place,i think traveled most in need many many money ,so i had work hard to money,
and save in bank to achieve that.i will carry on.
That's all,thank you.
hello,(Hello)ereryone, let me introduce myself, my name is Leung Eddy ,
you can call me Eddy Chak .I live in Prince Edward , i work in
Prince Edward , and i study in Prince Edward.(I do not only live, but also study and work in Prince Edward. So it is very convenient for me, and I also can save a lot of money. ).so ererybody say me lucky that so near to do ererything.(That's why everybody says that I am so lucky.) i think so, too.and i think the best is i can save many money. (Yeah, I am a lucky boy/girl.)
i like play volleyball (I like to play volleyball), and sometimes i play in Fa Hui Park, (I sometimes play volleyball with my friends in Fa Hui Park.)i also like play computer games , but i had not play that for a long time when i work out. (I also like to play computer games, but after I went out for work, I didn't play it anymore.)
my dream is go to Traveled in China , (My dream is that I can travel around China.)now i had been guangdong many place,(so far, I have been to many places, including Guangdong.) i think traveled most in need many many money ,so i had work hard to money,
and save in bank to achieve that. i will carry on.(I know travel can be very expensive, so I am planing to work harder and harder in order to save more money. Then, I can put on my backpack and continue my travel.)
That's all, thank you.
you can call me Eddy Chak .I live in Prince Edward , i work in
Prince Edward , and i study in Prince Edward.(I do not only live, but also study and work in Prince Edward. So it is very convenient for me, and I also can save a lot of money. ).so ererybody say me lucky that so near to do ererything.(That's why everybody says that I am so lucky.) i think so, too.and i think the best is i can save many money. (Yeah, I am a lucky boy/girl.)
i like play volleyball (I like to play volleyball), and sometimes i play in Fa Hui Park, (I sometimes play volleyball with my friends in Fa Hui Park.)i also like play computer games , but i had not play that for a long time when i work out. (I also like to play computer games, but after I went out for work, I didn't play it anymore.)
my dream is go to Traveled in China , (My dream is that I can travel around China.)now i had been guangdong many place,(so far, I have been to many places, including Guangdong.) i think traveled most in need many many money ,so i had work hard to money,
and save in bank to achieve that. i will carry on.(I know travel can be very expensive, so I am planing to work harder and harder in order to save more money. Then, I can put on my backpack and continue my travel.)
That's all, thank you.