作业帮写了封信,大家帮着改改,英文的,
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写了封信,大家帮着改改,英文的,
How are you?Due to my computer broke down,I haven't recieve your news.I'm so sorry about it.My English is not good,so I decide to write e-mail to you.Because My poor english grammer will brought trouble to you,you must have some patient to read it.Thank you for your forgiving.Now,I introduct myself to you,my chinese name is Zhang San.I haven't an english name now,but you can called me"G",or anything you want to.I know you are an English teacher,nice to meet you.I wonder how American's child learn English.Our teacher tell us recite words,listen VOA.Could you teach me some means to improve my English,thank you.
How are you?Due to my computer broke down,I haven't recieve your news.I'm so sorry about it.My English is not good,so I decide to write e-mail to you.Because My poor english grammer will brought trouble to you,you must have some patient to read it.Thank you for your forgiving.Now,I introduct myself to you,my chinese name is Zhang San.I haven't an english name now,but you can called me"G",or anything you want to.I know you are an English teacher,nice to meet you.I wonder how American's child learn English.Our teacher tell us recite words,listen VOA.Could you teach me some means to improve my English,thank you.
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How are you?As my computer has broken down,I haven't recieved your message.I'm so sorry about it.My English being very poor ,I decide to write an e-mail to you,.Please be patient to read through this even though my poor grammar may bring trouble to you.Now,I will introduce myself to you:my chinese name is Zhang San.I haven't an English name now,but you can called me"G",or anything you like.I know you are an English teacher,it's a pleasure of knowing you..I wonder how American's children learn English.Our teacher tells us to recite words,listen to VOA.Could you recommend me some useful methods to improve my English?Thank you!
Yours Sincerely
How are you?As my computer has broken down,I haven't recieved your message.I'm so sorry about it.My English being very poor ,I decide to write an e-mail to you,.Please be patient to read through this even though my poor grammar may bring trouble to you.Now,I will introduce myself to you:my chinese name is Zhang San.I haven't an English name now,but you can called me"G",or anything you like.I know you are an English teacher,it's a pleasure of knowing you..I wonder how American's children learn English.Our teacher tells us to recite words,listen to VOA.Could you recommend me some useful methods to improve my English?Thank you!
Yours Sincerely